Jeff finds himself in Silicon Valley where he is asked to investigate claims by a gregarious Frenchman that his neural network electronic technology actually works. He meets up again with the enchanting Nancy, the FBI agent he had worked with in Atlanta where they fell in love while he was still married, and again in Washington DC where fortune kept them apart. A surprise meeting with Kathy puts romance back into Jeff’s life as he finds himself hounded by financially-desperate Europeans so determined to push their questionable technology―men so desperate that they will stop at nothing, even Jeff’s murder. The excitement will make the reader gasp, tragedy will make the reader cry, romance will make the reader sigh.
Chapter 24 of Silicon Gulch … Jeff and Kathy make love!
Thursday Midnight: Kathy
Jeff and Kathy have long and wonderful love-making. They say I love you to each other once more as they share stories of their love lives, making promises to be together.
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Thursday
Midnight: Kathy
Jeff
turned onto the bed laying on his back, his manhood rising in excited
anticipation.
She looked down smiling climbing onto him, straddling him, leaning over their
mouths meeting with swirling tongues hot breaths lips covering faces in kisses her
warm breath swaddling his head her fingers curling through his hair.
He could feel her sweet bottom against his hardness, "Oh Kathy Kathy
Kathy ! I want you!" gasped from
his mouth, she reached under her guiding him into her, the head barely in her
pulling it back out trying to guide him in slowly, leaning back, pulling it out
again, trying again, pulling it back out again, he tried to push into her, "You
are so tight!" he marveled.
"It has been too long," her voice with a soft complaint, "you
were the last, be patient," as he felt himself slide into her, "oh
yes. Yes. Yes yes yes yes," sitting slowly back, his hardness gently
invading her sweet space, his hardness soon surrounded by her sweet warm
darkness her eyes closed head back with soft moans.
"Oh Jeff, it was so sweet last time, but now it is so much sweeter,
just you and me, I knew it would be so sweet…knew when I saw you…when you came
to my room…that night so long ago…so long ago…knew we would…"
Jeff pulled her down to him, his mouth capturing her left nipple, she
twisted her body so gently to yield up her delicious dark circle surround by
soft breast to his sucking lips, succoring the dark circlet of flesh in his
mouth, his tongue swirling, the tiniest little nip of his teeth that she
squeaked to, he could feel the muscles of her glorious insides constrict on
him, the gentle subtle female sign of two bodies joined in carnal harmony his mouth
finding her right breast she squeaked again with delight at his love's soft nibble.
She leaned down, they kissed, breaths quickened, she began her marvelous wonderful sweep with her
bottom back and forth his hardness flipping in and out in and out in and out Oh god yes Jeff, on my clit on my sweet
clit…rubbing on your… the slow sweep rubbing her bottom across his hips
back and forth back and forth back and forth sliding in and out in and out in
and out two breaths finding synchronized form inhaling her fragrant breath he
exhaled she catching every molecule of his panting sighs.
"Oh Jeff, tell me you love me."
"Oh god Kathy I love you
I love you I love you…"
"We said those words before…oh Jeff...we said them in DC…but now, oh
Jeff I love you, I have loved you from the moment our eyes met."
"Oh you beautiful liar but…lie to me, lie to me."
"I loved you before I ever saw you, I have waited my whole life for
you. You're here…with me…oh now my sweet man."
"Kathy oh my sweet Kathy tell me now that I will never be away from you
that you will never be…away from…"
Her sweep, hips back and forth, reaching up pulling her down pushing
deep inside of her feeling her inner muscles hasten their contractions like
ripples rolling up and down through her sugary space as he pushed harder, deeper
into her each time their hips were thrust together.
"Oh Jeff oh Jeff oh Jeff oh Jeff! Jeff! Jeff!" feeling her
body suddenly take hold of his hardness with a grip so tight he could barely
thrust more deeply into her that secret passage so taught around him, "Jeff!
Jeff! Oh, Jeff keep doing that! Keep doing that!"
She tossed her head back so that only her chin showed to him, he looked
up at her, perfect forms part of her perfect body. He couldn't believe that
this woman loved him, that this sweet angel had come to him, that their bodies
were joined this minute, minds swirling, soft shapes that emerged from his head
encircling these two lovers like soft wisps of light hugging these two bodies
that moved in such perfect harmony.
"Oh Jeff I'm going to…keep doing that…oh my Jeff my Jeff my
Jeff…keep―"
Suddenly she arched her back feeling her insides' firm grip on him, "OH
JEFF!" her body flopped forward his lips finding hers, her wonderful warm
breath cascading onto his face, her lips reaching frantically to his, their
lips bonded together.
"Jeff I'm…" she arched back again, "Jeff I'm…" her
body stiffened, her rock hard muscles contracting on Jeff he suddenly feeling
the tickle of his orgasm…coming…so slow…
"Kathy , please wait,
wait, wait, I'm…" he pushed his hips raising her from the bed.
"Jeff cum with me! Cum…oh Jeff…Jeff!"
"Kathy !"
"Jeff I knew…OH JEFF!"
Their bodies thrashed together in one great heave, she arched back one
last time, collapsing onto him kissing feverishly, staying inside her.
She lay on top of him, her arms tucked
under his, her face to his shoulder, breaths heaving reaching his arms around
her pulling her down to him wishing he
could pull her into him, pull her very flesh into his, to meld their bodies
into one. They lay like that until he could feel the soft pop as he came out of her.
With an enormous gentle smile she pouted, "You're mean!" she rolled
over onto his right side. They lay until their breathing finally subsided.
Speechless they lay, in the quiet Jeff could feel the true fusion of
their spirits beginning.
"That was amazing," she whispered into his ear. He nodded. "I've
never had that until we were together in DC, but that was so…I don't know."
"You mean with guards at the door and only an hour?"
"Yeah, it kind of killed the mood. But I did get it then, and now…"
she snuggled him, "yeah, now was much better than DC. I had never had an
orgasm until I met you."
He turned to her with a jerk, "Never?"
"Never. My ex-husband would just jump on and jump off." She
swirled a finger around his scant chest hairs. "I don't think I ever had
an orgasm." She laughed gently, "No, I know I didn't. Then you come
along and all I can say is so that's what
my girlfriends were always talking about!"
"I can't believe that. What about with other lovers?" He
couldn't believe he said that.
"I've never had another."
He pulled up his head turned to her, "You're kidding me."
She put her hand on his head pushing it back down, he looked to her.
"It was a bad relationship. He had no respect for me."
"So you mean you never…"
She shook her head. "I was never interested. Plus I came out of
that feeling pretty defeated. He was such a pig. I didn't know that when we
met."
"Pig is a strong word."
"Maybe not a pig, but he was never gentle. Not in any way. Not with
me, not with my friends, not with my family. He hated my sister."
"What's there to hate about your sister?"
"It was nothing, he just slowly came to hate everybody. We didn't
have sex at all the last two years."
"Wow, that's a long time."
"You know, that's probably why I was so…so bashful…you know, when
we first met."
He laughed, "Oh yes. Well let me tell you, I thought you were beautiful,
intimidating beautiful if I really thought about it."
"You didn't act like that."
He laughed, "I didn't say I
was intimidated!"
"Well I was intimidated by you. I told you that."
"Yes you did. So am I intimidating now?"
"No. No you're not. You're the most open man I have ever met."
She twirled her fingers on his chest, her breath soft on his shoulder.
"I don't know what it is about you mister Jeff. I feel…I mean…"
"What?"
"I don't want you to feel like I'm rushing you."
He rolled to his side, she moved onto her back, he took a very long second
to survey the perfect body before
him.
"Kathy , there is nothing
you can tell me, nothing that will make me feel like you are rushing me,"
touching her nose playfully. "But I am afraid."
"Afraid? Afraid of what?"
"No. I can't."
A determined expression suddenly appeared, "Listen mister Jeff, we
have been through a lot together. You owe it to me to tell me what's really on
your mind."
"But what about my heart?"
She smiled, "And especially your heart."
"It's just…I'm afraid. I realized last night when I was talking
with a friend," he paused, "yes, he's a friend. He and I have been
talking about all sorts of things. Last night we are sitting in a car together
just chatting, you know about things, all the sudden he asks me about my wife."
Jeff could not believe he said wife.
"We forgot our food!" she suddenly remembered, Jeff thankful
that he got a chance to change the subject.
They both jumped up naked going
downstairs. She picked up the cartons, "The food is pretty cold, let me
put it on a plate and we can microwave it."
Five minutes later a huge heaping plate with all sorts of Chinese food
piled high was being carried up held by a towel, Jeff carrying a six-pack of
Sierra Nevada Pale Ale retrieved from her refrigerator, holding a bottle
opener.
She set the food on the bed, whipped out two set of chopsticks while
Jeff opened four of the beers. He pulled two out, "This is great that you
have Sierra Nevada ."
"It's my favorite brand, I love this stuff!" they clinked
their bottles together.
They sat on each side of the plate on the bed Indian style, soon chopsticks
were flying.
"Okay, so what did your friend say?"
Jeff looked at her uncertain, "What did he say about your wife?"
"I don't remember exactly, but suddenly…I don't know…it was like a
rush in me that I was suddenly ready to let go of my wife!" He took a long
drink of his beer, kept eating.
He saw her squirm with these
words, looking to her. "Suddenly I realized that I was in love with you. I
even said it to him."
"You told someone else you love me?" setting her chopsticks
aside in wonder.
"Yes."
"Last night? Before I ever said it?"
"Yes! But you said those words in DC to me, I said them to you."
"Oh Jeff, I love you," she looked at the half-empty plate, "and
I don't know about you, but I'm done with Chinese food!" she pulled the
plate up setting it on the nightstand, took a long drink of her beer setting it
down. He could see where this was going finishing his beer setting the empty on
the other nightstand, reaching the case of beers next to it.
She laid down, he lay beside her, she pulled him on top of her surrounding
him in her arms feeling his hardness against her sweet soft lips, her dark moss
tickling his little head as it found her again pushing deep inside her once
more.
"Oh Jeff, I wanted to be the first to say those words, I don't
remember who was first in my room in DC that night, I waited so long, six long
years to find you." He pushed deep into her, their mouths meeting once
again joined by breath, joined by the sweet mingling of their frantic
perspiration. "Now you are here, you are here, oh Jeff…"
"Kathy …" their
bodies joined again in sweet ecstasy with arching backs, conjoined souls, until
again they collapsed together in soft wheezing, lay side-by-side again.
Jeff lost track of the time. They had made love twice, she thrilled to
three orgasms.
Softened breaths soon found them again, laying on his side snuggled
against her right breast.
"You said it."
"What?" he couldn't move.
"You said wife."
He looked up to the outline of her face against the wall, a perfect profile
for a perfect night, he sighed. "I'm sorry, I didn't mean to kill the
mood."
"Remember egg shells?"
Jeff glanced at the clock next to her bed, it was the stroke of
midnight, he smiled, "Yeah, and we are going to stomp them."
"Well your wife is eggshells, too. She's a really sweet woman."
Jeff pulled back to look at her,
"Really sweet woman?"
"I mean…I mean I'm sure she's
a really sweet woman. She would have to be if she's married to you!"
He wasn't sure what to make of this, so shrugged it off, "But we're
not married. Well at least we don't live together. So it's like not being
married."
"So you live alone?"
"Yeah, I did something that's not me. But it's just for a while."
"What? What's not you?"
"I bought a condo downtown. I've only ever lived in the suburbs, so
I thought that I would meet more people if I was in the city center."
"Downtown Seattle .
Well that's nice isn't it? But wait…you don't mean to meet people, you mean to
meet women!"
He laughed, "Can I tell you something and you promise not to laugh?"
She nodded. "This is the first time I've been laid since I was with my
wife more than a year ago." Then thinking of the congresswoman and Paula, "The
first time I've had sex."
She laughed out loud, "So when we were talking about dating our
right hands in DC you weren't kidding!"
He held up his right hand in a little bird formation, "Meet
Bridget!" his hand moved as he mouthed, "Hi Kathy ,
I am Jeff's alternate universe wife! I am sure glad he met you because this
son-of-a-gun is wearing me out!" they both laughed out loud.
"Well, if you look in that drawer over there you will see that
women have the marvels of plastic and batteries to get us through the night!"
Jeff laughed, "Maybe I need one of those blow-up dolls!"
She spread her legs pulling him
on top of her again, "Come here big boy, I'll be your blow-up doll!" they embraced making love again
this time even more passionately, like they both secretly feared that this would
be the very last time. The intensity of I
Love You in wisps of light swirling around them captivating two lonely
hearts, drawing their souls together until they collapsed again amid sheets wet
with the effluent of impassioned bodies. Lying side-by side they were two souls
connected by strands drawing them together with essences beyond the flesh,
beyond hearts.
Long minutes passed in silence when she turned to him. "You are a
musician right?" He nodded. "Do you write songs?" He nodded
again. "I like to write poetry. I've had a few of my poems published. Want
to hear one? I got a lot of great responses to it, mostly from women. Okay, only from women."
"Yeah, let me hear it."
"Okay, from heart…
My wild dreams fly unfettered in the
night
Feral creatures that scarcely
approach my hand held out
Scream silently from the confines of
the day
Small voices from the bracken of my
reality
Calling me to love
What are those tiny sounds coming to
my ear, crying to me
Scarcely heard above the din of
duties and routine
They are the voices yearning for love
That circle sweetly above the ruckus
Calling me to be loved
Yearning to find a place in the heart
of another
To draw two souls together
Finding love for me"
He turned to her stunned, "Oh my god, that is beautiful!"
"You really like it?
"Like it! I love the imagery…what was it…scream silently…and the line, what was it, bracken of my reality."
"From the bracken of my reality."
"Yes, I really love it, and you have more?"
"I do, I'll read them to you some time."
"When we're naked. That's best."
She pushed at him playfully, "You only liked it because you got to
look at my breasts while I said it!"
"That's not true," he said with a mock pouty face, "I got
to look at your pussy too!"
She pushed him playfully.
"Okay, your body does provide a nice backdrop to poetry," he
reached across to kiss each nipple.
"And you do like it."
"Really. I'm not surprised. I mean about the poems. I can only hope
you like my songs half as much." She smiled at his words. "Kathy , you are a very passionate woman."
"A woman that is not rushing you?"
"Can I put you in my suitcase and take you home?"
"I'd like that. But do you have a really big suitcase?"
"Kathy ." He turned
to her earnestly, "Kathy …no
never mind."
"Jeffery, we're doing eggshells, aren't we?"
"I mean…you're going to think I'm crazy…but I have this fantasy."
"Oooooh, I love fantasies."
"It's just that, now you're going to think that I'm rushing you!"
"Try me."
"I have this fantasy of being with you. You know, being together."
She gave an impish smile, "Are you inviting me to come live with
you? In Seattle ?"
He nodded firmly, "Yes. I am. I mean I know you have your job, you
have your daughter, she has her school and her friends. I mean maybe we could
do some distance thing…"
She smiled. "I don't do long distance.
Not with you. Besides, you don't even know what I do for a living!"
"You're an attorney, I figured that out."
"I told you that night at the bar in DC!" she punched him in
the arm. "Yes, I am an attorney. Any idea what I specialize in?" Jeff
shrugged. "I specialize in government compliance for the manufacturing and
aerospace industries."
"Wow, that means…"
"It means that I am no stranger to what you do. I respect what you
do, who you are. That you can learn to respect me. Beyond us. As a woman. As a
man. As a person."
"My god, respect," his
whispered, tears suddenly welling in his eyes.
She turned to him, "My god, are you crying?"
"Oh god, Kathy . I am…I
am…" tears flowing down his face.
She gathered him in her arms, "Come here, what are you saying?"
"Last night," he sniffed, "in the car with Ted."
"Who's Ted?"
"He's my body g―" he caught himself, "he's my friend I
told you about. When I was having my moment of epiphany about my wife―"
"Jeff honey, can we just call her Donna?"
"Yes. Donna," it felt so strange to use her name laying here
naked with this new soul mate that he had just made love to over and over
again, "I told him that I was falling in love with you. He asked me what I
want. What do I want from life."
"What did you say?"
"I told him that if I could find a woman that respected me, that I
respected, truly respected each other as equals, that my life would be perfect.
That everything else I need would flow from that."
"And good sex doesn't hurt either!" she poked him in the arm
again.
"No, that certainly doesn't hurt!" they laughed together. Jeff
looked to the clock surprised to see it was nearly two.
"But there is more to this. Nancy
has been trying to corner me to talk to me, but we keep getting interrupted. We
talked about my wife―I mean Donna―and―"
She put her hand up, "Wait Jeff, first. I need to know about Nancy . Egg shells!"
"What do you want to know?"
Laying her hand on his chest she said simply, "Everything."
"Okay, this is the truth. We met in Atlanta . I will tell you the whole story some
day I hope. We…well we…"
"You fell in love."
"I thought so, but now I don't know. We only ever had one night
together. God, you'd think that we would have had more. Does this bother you?"
"No. No, and let me tell you why." He shrugged, "Because you are telling me. I trust you. I
believe you will tell me the truth."
Jeff shuddered at those words given Lin the congresswoman and Paula.
But! They didn't have sex!
"So yes, I thought we were in love with each other. But I've come
to realize that we are from different worlds. I feel so comfortable here. With Nancy we are strangers in
each other's house. With you. It is so weird, but I feel like I've known you my
whole life. You understand what I'm saying, right?"
"More than you know."
"She lives in this wild shoot-em-up world. I'm just a dopey
engineer who happened to get sucked into these cases." She took a sharp
breath. "Are you okay?" She nodded but he could tell something wasn't
right. "So anyway I think it was because I felt so lonely. Life was pretty
confusing for me then." He shook his head, "Although I can tell you
that it ain't exactly all straightforward right now," turning to her
quickly, "I'm sorry, that's not what I meant."
"What I mean is that, well, the thing I want most in life is the
thing that is most elusive for me right now."
She snuggled to him, "What is that, what do you want?"
"I want a strong relationship with just one woman. Committed."
"So what do you think is going on with your wife?"
"Nancy
told me some things. Did you know that Nancy
has been talking to my wife?"
There was a sudden jerk in Kathy's body, she blurted out, "What?
Your wife? Really?"
Jeff paused for a second trying to measure Kathy's tone, shaking his
head so slightly, "Yeah, they both told me. After DC." He wanted to
tell her how his wife's kidnapping fit into the timeline of that week, but he
realized a big event that week was Kathy showing up to his room with the
poisoned bottle of beer, so he thought it might be better just to skip that
part.
"I'm not sure if you know it, but the night you came to my room,
the night that Nancy
busted in on us, Donna had decided to surprise me and flew out. She was in my
room just minutes before you came down and Ted let you in."
She paused reflectively wanting to say something about that night but
kept her mouth closed continuing to listen.
"Anyway, she was there when she saw a note from Nancy ."
"I gave you a note."
He smiled with a big sigh, "Yes you did. And boy did you."
She smiled uncertain about this as they leaned to each other kissing.
Jeff continued, "Anyway, that somehow turned them into, I don't
know, correspondents I guess. They talked a bunch of times on the phone."
"That was okay with you?"
"Actually, it freaked me out at first. It has always been one of my
nightmares that two of my lovers would get together."
"You worry that we will talk about you?"
"Yes."
"But what if we didn't talk about you? What if we just liked each
other?"
"Mmmmm, I don't know."
"What if we talked about things in your life maybe? About our
concerns? Maybe about ways to help you?" She motioned for a new beer, he
handed it to her. She put it to her lips downing half the bottle in one swallow,
smacked her lips setting it down on her nightstand. "What if we would be
doing something like…maybe…getting permission?"
Jeff shrugged, not comprehending her words. "Like I said, it doesn't
freak me out so much after Nancy
explained it to me."
"Maybe two of us should get hold of you naked!"
"Okay, now that would really freak
me out!" they laughed together.
"So Jeff," her tone had changed, she looked to him concerned. "When
I took your coat, I found a gun in the pocket."
"Oh, yeah. That."
"Is there something you're not telling me?"
He sat silently looking at her, to the wall, back to her, the wall
again. Turning to her, "You remember DC, right?" She nodded. "You
remember the woman who barged in on us that night?"
"That is not something I will ever forget!"
"Well, that was Nancy .
She's FBI. You probably figured out that we were on some kind of case. And we
were. I got sucked into it. Look, you signed that non-disclosure, so did I. God,
I can hardly wait until we're…I really need someone to tell this to… but…I
mean…"
She smiled, "You can say it, when we're together."
Jeff paused at those words when we're
together feeling a warm rush in his chest.
"Yeah, anyway we were on a case. Then again on the case in DC when
you and I met. Now I've found myself on another case here."
Her face turned to deep concern, "Oh, Jeff, please tell me that you're
not in danger."
"No, no. Really. Things are fine. I can't talk about it. It'll all
be over tomorrow before I go…" his voice trailed off.
"Before you go home. Jeff you can say these things, I'm a big girl."
"Anyway, it will all be over by tomorrow afternoon."
"And you promise me that you're safe."
"Yes, I got assurances today from…well from someone who said that I'm
safe."
"What time is your plane tomorrow?"
"Five PM."
"What airline?"
"Alaska ,
why?"
"San Jose ?"
"Yes, but why?"
She rolled casually away
pulling out a nightgown, standing putting it on.
"What are you doing?" he asked.
"If you're telling me you are up to another round…"
"No, no," looking down at his shrunken member, "I think
what, three times is all he can muster tonight. I mean maybe…maybe next time.
It's been a long week."
She smiled looking down contemplating the sight before her.
"Plus there will be more times, right?" she smiled, he nodded.
She got back onto the bed, sitting on her knees, "Look Jeff, I have
to ask you." She looked down at her robed body, "At least while one
of us has clothes on. Are you serious about us? Serious that you want to see me
again?"
He pulled himself up onto his knees on the bed, leaning forward so their
foreheads touched.
"Now listen to me carefully. I will only say this one…or maybe three
hundred thousand times," she giggled with her forehead still to his. "I
have fallen in love with you. I love Donna, I love my children, and I love Nancy ."
"I knew that but are you―"
"Upupup!" he could see her smile, "let me finish! You are
the only woman I am in love with. And
I am crazy about you."
"Yes, but does that mean―" he put his fingers to her lips.
"I see you and me together. And I can't wait for it to happen,"
he smiled.
"Jeff I said I have a surprise for you."
"Why won't you let me finish my little speech here?" he
demanded playfully.
She smiled again nodding.
"So as far as I'm concerned, after all this craziness is over
tomorrow I will want to stuff you into my little
suitcase and take you home with me. I'll go buy another one for Hannah."
He looked to the clock reading two twenty-eight, she saw his glance.
"Look―"
She put her fingers to his lips, "Don't say it, I know you have an
early meeting."
He laughed, "That sounds like some excuse to escape doesn't it?"
"But I know you're not. Spending the night means commitment, you
know. That's a woman's view of in anyway. But I forgive you." He could see
she was afraid to say the words that she knew he was committed anyway.
She stood going around the bed, he turned to face her, sitting on the
edge of the bed toward the door. She stepped to him kneeling over in front of
him, taking the small figure between his legs into her mouth, pushing him back
onto the bed, kneeling between his legs.
"Kathy , you don't have
to do this."
She looked up at him, "I know," putting her mouth back onto
him, he grew in her mouth as she slid him in and out in and out in and out, him
looking down watching his hardness disappearing and reappearing into her mouth,
"Oh god Kathy it has been so
long…so long…oh babe…so long since a woman like you…like you," he leaned
his head back with his arms straight behind him on the bed. "Oh, god,
honey, oh babe I'm gonna…do you want me to…oh babe, oh my Kathy ! Kathy !
Oh baby, ooooooooooooh!" he wrenched back, his back and legs tightened
until he could feel himself gushing she keeping her mouth over him holding him
in her mouth, holding, sucking as he slowly softened. Finally she stood up
leaning to put her mouth to his squirting his load onto his tongue whispering
to him, "It's so much nicer to share."
He swallowed his sweet juice looking at her in wonder, "You did
that!"
"Now we have both cum the same number of times!" she stood up
wiping her mouth with the back of her hand, "I mean it's only fair, right?"
She lay down next to him, holding each other kissing passionately, "Kathy , please tell me that I get you in my life.
Please."
"Jeff, I have arrived."
She laughed thinking of Hannah, "Or rather we have arrived."
"I love her, she is just like you. I love you both."
She signed with her head on his shoulder, "Mister Jeff. Jeff Jeff Jeff. This could be the happiest moment of my life."
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