Wednesday, June 27, 2012

Magic Town, Chapter 20

Jeff, finds himself in Atlanta wanting to get out of the hotel on a Friday night. In the Atlanta Underground he meets up with Pick, a sly con man who takes Jeff around the Underground ending up at the notorious Magic Town strip club. There’s only one problem: Jeff is the spitting image of a corrupt congressman! Nancy, the beautiful FBI agent with the golden eyes takes Jeff on the ride of his life. With three climax scenes, this story will make you want to get to the next page!


Chapter 20 of Magic Town ...

Sunday 4:34 PM: Laying the Net

Jeff finally meets Joel, the congressman’s chief aid, and Jeff is disgusted with this arrogant ass. He and Shonna take a drive to see the crooked city council members, then to the chief of police who pulls a gun on Jeff, but he shrugs it off leaving the Chief stunned. Then they go to see the mayor who pulls a gun on them, but thanks to Arnie they have a little surprise in store for the mayor …


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          Magic Town, Chapter 20


Sunday 4:34 PM: Laying the Net 

     Ten minutes later Jeff found himself standing erect as a man named Joel circled Jeff slowly, inspecting him. “Jesus, he could be the congressman’s twin brother, where’d you find this guy?” Jeff had been introduced to this man named Joel something, the Chief Aid to the congressman as it had been announced by him to Jeff. He instantly disliked this man’s presumptuous and arrogant manner.
     Shonna watched this process, “That doesn’t matter, anything we need to fix?”
     “He’s just a little taller, I don’t know, maybe a half-inch, but he can’t slouch because the congressman never slouches. But other than that, congressman’s hair is a little straighter, but everything else is perfect! I can’t believe they’re not identical twin brothers!”
     Joel stood in front of Jeff, “Say something.”
     Jeff turned to Shonna half-smiling, back to Joel, “The Gettysburg address?” He thought about suggesting saying how he loves his slut, but he was sure that this Joel character looked a little too straight to be let in on their little joke.
     “Go ahead, say anything,” Joel instructed.
     Jeff took a deep breath, spoke some words. Joel made the same comment about his voice needing to be a little lower, much more gruff, that’s almost always how the congressman speaks. They spent the next twenty minutes with Jeff practicing the word son-of-a-bitch, the only curse the congressman ever says––though it is his favorite curse that he says in about every other sentence, with that certain roll off the tongue––how to walk in the congressman’s aggressive gait, how Jeff probably could not be gruff enough even if he tried so not to worry about going overboard being the biggest prick he could possibly muster. And being proud of it! Wow, this must have been quite a fun guy to be around was all Jeff could think.
     A woman walked up to Jeff with an eyebrow pencil. He offered his chin up as Shonna smirked, “This one won’t rub off!”
     Joel turned to Shonna, “So what’s this all about? Where is Frank? Why is this guy impersonating the congressman? And what the hell was that press conference?” He turned to Shonna with a scowl, “Shonna, what the hell is going on here, and who is this guy and who is trying to run this show?” Jeff was concerned as he watched this man change character so quickly from warmly smug to almost whiny. And what was who is trying to run this show?
     Shonna saw Jeff’s concern, gave him a quick sharp look as in let me handle this pulling Joel aside. Jeff could tell that she was saying absolutely as little as possible, what he heard make it clear that she was feeding him all sorts of wrong information. He gingerly took a half side-step toward them, listening in while pretending to look away, it was clear that the information she was feeding him wasn’t random, there was a clear strategy to what she was saying. He didn’t recall any discussion about this with the team. Was she winging it? Was this discussed in that little meeting while he was out in the backyard?
     Soon they walked back to Jeff, in a minute Joel shook Jeff’s hand with a confused face, “Well, good luck, whatever it is you guys are doing.”
     In a few more minutes they were at the door. Once more Jeff was handed the little Colt Cobra––this time he didn’t question the wisdom as he slipped it into the stinky coat pocket.  
     Ten minutes later Jeff found himself sitting in Shonna’s car as they headed toward downtown once more. “Someone asked about him in the meeting and you brushed it off.”
     She glanced at him, back to the road, “I knew he was going to be coaching you, I didn’t want you to be nervous.”
     “How involved is he?”
     “We don’t think too much, but he is certainly the telegraph between the gang and the congressman.”
     “So your bringing him up to Roswell sure blew your cover didn’t it?”
     “We did that deliberately.”
     “You wanted him to know that you’re FBI and the Feds are all around this?”
     “Yes.”
     “When was this decided?”
     “It was my decision. We keep talking about wanting to get these guys off kilter. This is an extension of that with a little divide and conquer. If Joel knows that we are circling around this he will start trying to figure a way out of this if he is involved, or at least be willing to give up some names if he’s not. He’s got to be near the top of this or at least knows who is.”
     “But if you knew this, why did you nominate Antonio? I thought that you guys all voted on that stuff.” They drove on. “So the only reason why I didn’t know about this guy was because of the coaching.” Jeff watched her as she nodded.
      Something in her expression whispered there was more to the story.
     “I don’t believe you.”
     She didn’t take her eyes off the road, “Actually, we think he is very involved. We just don’t know how much. Even with all of the congressman’s famous absences, there’s no way he could have enough time to be involved that much in the gang. And he wasn’t really all that bright. There has to be someone else. And Antonio is just too much of an outsider for that group, there is no way that Antonio could be doing much more than just moving money around and sending out the monkeys to raise hell.” She glanced quickly at him. “Joel could be a much bigger player, we’re just not sure.” Pondering silence. “We just don’t know. There are also some other players, but I suspect we are going to learn an awful lot in the––” she glanced at the car’s clock, “in the next twenty hours.”
     Fifteen minutes later they pulled into the garage at the main Atlanta City Hall, soon they were on an elevator heading to the third floor. “Just remember, don’t be calm, be gruff. These city council guys don’t know you all that well so think of this as practice.”
     Soon they were being led into a room with the door marked Private City Council Chambers. They walked into a room with two women and eleven men sitting around a long table with the head of the table obviously reserved for them. The two walked into the room, stopped, standing at the door causing many to twist around in their chairs toward the visitors.
     Jeff worked hard to keep a determined frown as he spoke. “You all know who I am, what you don’t know is why I’m here.”
     “Well actually,” said a short balding black man in the rear of the room, “we have heard certain rumors of why you are here. We all are here because we take those rumors very seriously. And what about that press conference? Are you really going to spill us all to the Feds?”
     Jeff ignored him as he scowled around the table from face to face getting thirteen concerned frowns back.
     Jeff spoke firmly practicing the gruff tone, looking at the man who’d just spoken, “I didn’t come here to answer your questions you little bald son-of-a-bitch, so shut up!” The man cowered lowing his head as Jeff turned to the whole group, “Listen all you sons-a-bitches, we’ve had our nice little business here now for four years since I’ve been involved, and things have always been working fine, a lot of it thanks to a couple of you. Maybe.” He tightened his scowl. “But suddenly things have started getting a little crazy.” The faces around the table turned more grim. “If we don’t act, there’s no telling where this will go. I don’t need to tell you the downside. For you. For your families! Just ask the mayor. He will tell you in case you have any doubts!” A low grumble arose from suddenly terrified faces.
     Jeff turned, walking down one side of the table with people turning around to look at him as he passed. He slowly circled the table with a menacing glare face by face, each turning away with a frightened jerk. 
     “I am getting grumbling that the split’s not fair, that some of you are getting more than you deserve from this operation.” The grumbling became louder as the fright turned to anger. “But I’m not so sure.”
     A voice was heard, “Why are you here, why isn’t Joel here telling us this?”
     Jeff felt a startle that he turned into a flash of anger, “Son-of-a-bitch! WHO SAID THAT!” Nobody offered up a hand. Jeff thought what the hell is going on?
     Improvise! Improvise!
     “It’s because––”
     Shonna stepped forward, “You know it’s not your place to ask any questions!” She glared at the room. “You little shits are lucky to even be in this business. We could have pulled this off just fine all these years without you––you know it!” She looked from face to face with stern hatred. “That’s why they want to cut you stupid bastards out!”
     The room was perfectly quiet except for the roar of seething faces pressed against Shonna, enraged silent expressions that swung to Jeff, back to her.
     Jeff stepped forward, “There’s a meeting at Magic Town tomorrow. The whole deal is going to be redone. If you’re not there then you are cut out!” The angry expressions suddenly turned to astonishment, not a sound was heard.
     “If you sons-a-bitches want to continue to be part of this, just be there tomorrow!” Without another word he and Shonna walked briskly through the door.
     They got into the car. Shonna pulled away screeching her tires in the echoey enclosed parking lot. Jeff finally gasped, “Oh my god, I thought I was going to die in there!”
     Shonna looked at him sideways smiling, “But you did good! For a second even I thought you were the congressman!” They turned out of the lot, turning left. She sat pondering quietly as she drove. “Why was Joel mentioned? What is his role?” She spoke softly almost to herself. “He must be the go-between, the messenger between these creeps and the congressman. Yeah, that all makes sense. It’s what we suspected, right?”
     Jeff shrugged looking out the car windows at the approaching darkness.
     She glanced at him, “Good recovery back there. I was surprised too. I expect we’ll hear his name again tonight.”
     Soon they were pulling into the parking lot of the main Atlanta police station, a tall building buzzing with people around it even on a Sunday evening. They pulled into the multi-story parking garage. Shonna glanced at a piece of paper she was holding, steered to the second level toward the building. As she turned off the engine she turned to him, “Hold on to that style you did back there, maybe even a little more gruff, you almost got it. The biggest shows are still coming.”
     She signaled to him to wait getting out of the car, Jeff noticing her holding a gun with both hands raised in front of her chin. She emerged from the car very slowly, scanning in all directions, closed her door slowly, bumping it with her hip to latch it. She looked down signaling with her gun for Jeff to get out, he did the same routine with his door, bumping it closed. They walked toward the door, Jeff walking forward as Shonna walked backward continuing to scan the parking lot they were leaving, gun in front of her face as they neared the building.
     Soon they found themselves exiting an elevator. A policeman was waiting for them, without a word signaling them to follow him down the hall to an office with only one word on the door, “CHIEF.”
     The door was closed behind them. There sat the man Jeff had seen in one of the photographs from yesterday, behind an enormous desk. Four men were seated on his left in a row, all with badged hats in their laps. Without a word the Chief pointed to two chairs, they both walked up standing behind the chairs.
     The room was an enormous office, Jeff guessed it was the size of his living room at home, all in rich wood paneling, shelves of trophies and commendations along both sides, family photos, grown kids maybe, a woman who could be his wife.
     The chief wore a closed expression with dark eyes even for a black man. Jeff guessed he had to be more than a hundred pounds overweight at least, sitting his belly extended over his belt laying in his lap.
     “Well, congressman,” said the Chief in an almost warm expression. “What brings you out here on a Sunday night?” he looked intently at them standing there, “And why are you here and not Joel?”
     Jeff scowled, “Why are to asking me anything? Why are you talking to me! I’m the one who came here to do the talking so shut up you son-of-a-bitch!” Jeff could tell the Chief was used to controlling conversations, he was certainly not used to someone talking like this to him in his own office. The Chief squirmed in his chair ever so slightly––Jeff knew he was in control!
     He felt himself swell with confidence.
     After everything he’d been through in the last forty-eight hours Jeff was in no mood to be screwed with.
     They wanted a pissed off congressman? They were going to get a pissed off congressman!
     “I came here only for one reason. Seems word’s getting around that you guys aren’t doing a very good job in this deal.”
     The Chief jolted out of his chair to half-standing, his fat belly bobbling, “What the hell are you talking about!”
     “SIT THE HELL DOWN!” The Chief scanned the four to his left with a dumfounded expression, back to Jeff, slowly lowering himself back into the chair, hands on arm rests to steady his huge frame, clasped on the handles like he was ready to jump up again as Jeff took a half-step forward pointing to the Chief’s face, “And don’t you dare raise your voice to me again you son-of-a-bitch!”
     Jeff’s expression suddenly softened, the slightest smile of sorts, “Look, look, we’re all friends here, right?” Nothing. “But it seems like there’s been a lot of bodies floating around Atlanta all the sudden.” He shrugged. “I mean, whose job is it to worry about that? Mine?” He nodded toward Shonna, “Hers?” He scowled at the Chief. “What the hell is going on, and why the hell can’t you stupid cops manage to stop people from running around killing everyone! There have been some very important people who have gotten hurt very badly, killed, and this is really pissing me off!
     “We don’t know nothing about that!” the Chief scowled.
     “Of course you don’t! YOU’RE INCOMPETENT!” Jeff paced in a small line back and forth as though in deep thought. “You are getting paid a lot of money from this deal and all we ask is a little order, but all you do is sit there on big your fat ass while some shooter goes running around killing people!” He found himself so worked up that he was nearly spitting the words, “You and your stupid cops are screwing this whole thing up!”
     The Chief started to speak, Jeff put up his hand to stop him. In a softer, almost consoling voice he continued, “So you see the problem. Seems like certain of our partners are beginning to question how committed you are to our little business venture.”
     “What the hell’s that supposed to mean?”
     “It means that people are talking about wanting to re-do our little understanding, maybe change it up a little.” He thought about his little press briefing yesterday, “Maybe give some names up to the Feds, that would certainly thin the roster out!”
     The Chief jumped up again, “If anybody tries to cut me out there’ll be hell to pay! You go talking to the Feds and we’ll kill you!”
     “You mean like you TRIED TO KILL ME YESTERDAY?” The Chief looked to his captains in vain for support. Their eyes locked forward staring into space.
     Jeff caught his breath putting up his hands in a calming fashion, “Look, we understand that things can happen, but next thing you know people misunderstand, start thinking that maybe we don’t really need you.” His expression changed to deeply questioning, “And then we see you coming out of a house with bodies laying all around inside?”
     The Chief gasped as though choking for air, “I had nothing to do with those murders. NOTHING!”
     “I said…” leaning toward the Chief, “SHUT UP!” Jeff paced the room throwing his arms around in theatrical fury, coming to a slow stop in front of the Chief again, deliberately performing an exaggerated act of calming down. Man, I better get an Oscar for this!  he thought to himself as he looked eye-to-eye at the Chief.
     “So as I was saying, there are some who think you should not be part of our little club anymore. The Chief choking in his anger, Jeff continued firmly, “Not me, mind you!”
     “Who then!”
     “I just hear rumblings, and I don’t want any trouble,” continuing his consoling tone.
     The Chief shook his head, “I knew it, that greedy bastard mayor!
     “Look,” Jeff continued, “All I know is that we’ve got to get this straightened out before it gets even uglier. We have a meeting tomorrow, noon at Magic Town, a meeting that we have been needing for a while, and it has been decided––”
     “Decided by who!”
     Jeff ignored him, “Like I said, it has been decided that we need a meeting, tomorrow. Noon. Whoever doesn’t show is out. Period. We have too many players and the cuts keep getting thinner and thinner, and given all the bad stuff that’s been happening we need to rein this in so it doesn’t get even more out of hand.”
     Jeff turned to Shonna with his gruffest voice, “We’re done with these sons-a-bitches! Come on!”
     They reached the door when Jeff heard the clicking of a trigger being pulled back. He calmly turned around to see the Chief standing with his arms extended holding a gun on Jeff. Jeff was surprised at his own calm, “Now Chief, this is a nasty place for a murder, isn’t it?” He glanced at the four captains who had sat with those silly blank expressions without a word the whole time, back at the Chief who raised his gun even higher.
     “Tomorrow! Noon!”
     Jeff took a few extra seconds to smile condescendingly at the Chief.
     They turned and left as the word Oscar! flashed in Jeff’s mind.
     They retraced their steps, Shonna did the same routine with gun to chin, only this time she was guarding all sides of them as they walked quickly to the car. Jeff was relieved that nobody happened to be in the garage either time when she was doing her Dick Tracy pose, but he was very happy that she was doing it.
     Jeff closed the car door as Shonna got in beside him, “I think I pissed my pants!”
     She shook her head turning to him astonished, “You were amazing in there!”
     He looked at her, they burst out laughing as she turned the key, the engine started as they laughed again. She pulled out of the parking lot, “Okay, one more stop. This will be the tough one.” Jeff flopped his head back with a thump on the head rest, she glanced at him, “But we have a little surprise for them that I think you will like.”
     She headed to the freeway, turned south for a change explaining that the mayor wanted the meeting at his house. Jeff looked at her worryingly asking if they would be away from people on their own. She laughed saying that they have suspected him of so many things that his house has been wired for years.
     Soon they were passing the Hilton on their left, his Sheraton on the right. He smiled as he watched the tall building pass, remembering the event with his little slut yesterday. That building passing by seemed like a metaphor for this weekend, so much passing so quickly, every moment a distinct distant memory.
     Every moment streaming by uncontrollably.
     As they drove she leaned slightly to the steering wheel looking to her right at Jeff as though she was inspecting him. He returned a puzzled look with a little smile. “You know,” she said softly, “I have no idea where you get this amazing courage from. I mean, you are what we call feet off the street, you have no training in this at all. But I swear I saw our asshole congressman in there, maybe even better than the original.” She leaned back again. “I just want you to know that I am way beyond impressed. Way beyond. I really admire you for doing this and putting your whole heart into it.” She glanced at him with a thankful smile, “What I said about not being impressed when we first met? Cancel that. At this moment there is no limit to my respect for you.”
     He felt a little embarrassed by this sudden gush of accolades, nodding, “Thank you. I’m not sure who I’m really doing this for, who I’m trying to impress.”
     He knew it was for her.
     Jeff asked her about the mayor’s involvement, what she knew about the murder of some of his family ten years ago. She explained what he had already read before about Atlanta politics, how they have been notoriously corrupt since the dawn of time as far as she knew. There are city leaders, city bureaucrats and others always getting arrested for all sorts of graft, so it’s hard to know when noise is not just noise. She said she didn’t know all the inside, had read up on it in preparation for the case, that the case is unsolved, her guess is that is will never be solved.
     “There are just too many people involved in this stuff, sometimes justice is contrary to peoples’ interests.” She glanced at Jeff, “Monetary interests.”
     As they drove, Jeff suddenly got curious. “You’ve been with the FBI now for what, a couple of three years?” She nodded, head forward. “So all these bodies, is this the first time you’ve ever seen this? I mean your first murdered bodies?”
     She took her eyes off the road to give him a long look. “Once while I was still interning there was a case when I saw one dead man, similar kind of crimes, but not nearly as big as this.” She shook her head slowly, “But this is like nothing I have ever seen. They did a lot to try to prepare us in training. But it’s impossible to train you for this. Impossible. You just have to go through the experience.”
     Jeff turned to her in the darkness, the instrument panel light outlining her face. He couldn’t help but admire her courage. Her grace and style still came through even with all this pressure. He felt that rush in his chest again hoping it was too dark for her to see his flushed face yet one more time.
     They drove for over a half-hour, long past the airport. Jeff looked up out his window seeing a bright starscape overhead so far away from the city lights. He laughed to himself that he could see only two stars when they stepped out in front of the filthy little coffee shop yesterday morning in the dark, now the stars were so bright that they nearly lit up the landscape even without the moon.
     Soon they pulled off the freeway, turned right, headed through what looked like a tunnel with tall trees on each side arching over the road, the canopy blocking the stars overhead. Soon took a left, went a mile or so, turned right into a driveway with imposing pillars and a gate. Shonna rolled down her window as they heard a crackle of a voice, “Congressman Frank Schedz and escort.” A few seconds later the gate began to open with a low hum, they drove through.
     Jeff guessed the driveway to be two hundred yards long at least, leading to an enormous house, lit up grandly with floodlights. A man greeted them at the door, leading them toward the back into a large room, well lit, five men sitting on couches or large stuffed chairs. One man stood up walking up to Jeff, “Good evening, congressman, thank you for coming.” Jeff recognized the mayor from the photos. The other men stood up in turn shaking Jeff’s hand, Jeff recognized two of them from the pictures.
     “Sit down, please,” the mayor motioned Jeff to a chair.
     Jeff immediately went into character, “I didn’t come here to chit chat you son-of-a-bitch, I’m pretty sure you’ve gotten calls already, you know why I’m here.”
     “Yes,” the mayor smiled as he sat down, “I’ve gotten a number of interesting calls, but one call in particular was very interesting.”
     Jeff looked intently at the man, trying to keep his best scowl.
     “So tell me, congressman,” the mayor looked down at his hand as though admiring his fingernails casually, looking back up to Jeff, “How well does an eyebrow pencil work when making a fake mole?”
     Jeff gave a startled turn to Shonna whose eyes told him she had already anticipated this treachery, before he could look back he heard the click of a gun’s trigger being pulled back. His only thought was how tired he was of hearing that sound as he slowly turned to look at the mayor standing holding a gun on him. “Funny, there congressman, you sure fooled everyone else.”
     “Let me guess,” Jeff shook his head, “Joel, right?”
     The mayor nodded, “He’s our eyes and ears. He’s our main man. He’s our everything, but you already knew that, right?”
     “So what are you going to do, shoot us?” Jeff looked around at the men sitting next to the mayor surprised at their blank expressions. How was it that rooms full of grown, supposedly responsible men could just sit in this kind of situation expressionless? He saw it in the Chief’s office, now here it was happening again. At least the city council people looked more engaged for god’s sake. All he could think is who the hell are these people?
     “Whatever it takes to keep you from going to the Feds tomorrow. But shoot you here? Oh, no, no, no, I like my furniture way too much. And blood is so hard to get out of expensive carpets.” He motioned to the outside glass door with his gun, the door pitch-black with darkness behind it, motioning the same to Shonna.
     Suddenly Shonna stepped toward the mayor, “Mayor, you really don’t want to be doing that right now.”
     The mayor smiled, “And why is that?”
     “Can I use your phone?”
     “Why would I let you do that seeing as I am just going to kill you, that could be inconvenient. Seems unnecessary really.”
     “I just wanted you to talk to the man who is watching us.”
     The mayor gave a startled expression, Shonna moved slowly toward the phone on a desk to his right without asking his permission again, picking it up pushing buttons. “Arnie? Let me put you on speaker phone.” She pushed another button, “Can you hear me?”
     In a second they could all hear the scratchy sound of a voice on the line, a familiar voice, “Now Shonna, why would you just go over to the mayor’s house all by yourself? Oh, you’re not alone, hi there congressman!” The mayor’s eyes widened. “By the way, mister mayor, I hate that blue polo you’re wearing. My wife gave me one just like it, I gave it to the housekeeper for a rag. So mister mayor, please put down the gun.”
     The mayor turned his gun to the phone as though he was threatening the caller, “Who are you? You’re the Feds!” the mayor yelled glancing from phone to Shonna to Jeff, back to Shonna, back to the phone, gun still pointing to the phone.
     “Now mister mayor,” Arnie continued with a chuckle, “shooting the phone is not going to help you here,” Arnie made a big out-loud mocking laugh.
     The mayor slowly lowered his gun looking back at Jeff and Shonna, continuing a confused round of looking between the phone and them standing there. Jeff noticed the four men turning to each other, finally showing expressions––of worry.
     Arnie’s voice continued on the speaker phone, “Let’s just say we’re people who are very interested in getting this whole situation calmed down, there’s been way too much shooting lately, we want to find a way to get this operation all resolved.”
     “You’re not with the Feds? How––how––how did you wire my house?” the mayor stammered speaking to the phone.
     “Mister mayor,” Shonna smiled tersely stepping forward, “we’re all friends here, right? But everyone is getting so jumpy. The reason why we came here is because we’re hearing all sorts of nasty things about how you’re screwing up the operation, there are people who want to cut you out.” Now the four silent men sat up taking frightened notice as they scanned back and forth between each other, Shonna, the mayor, Jeff, glancing at the phone.
     “So mister mayor,” Shonna stepped forward, “we’re going to invite you to a meeting tomorrow at Magic Town. Noon. Just a nice little chat about what’s been going on, maybe take another look at how we’re running the business.”
     The mayor scowled at her, at Jeff, “Look congressman, or whoever you are, you and this bitch are not reducing my share! Not one penny! I don’t care who told you what, I’ve been holding up my end, so has my staff,” he nodded to the four sitting next to him each responding with exaggerated expressions of approval.
     Shonna pulled Jeff by the sleeve, “Come on, let’s get out of here,” turning to the mayor. “Here’s the deal. Show up tomorrow. Noon…or get cut out…period!”
     Without another word she turned to the door walking out as Jeff followed her. Jeff looked back to see the mayor’s defeated expression, gun dangling by his side.
     Jeff looked out the window into the darkness as the Mustang turned onto the freeway, “God, I am sure goddam tired of getting guns pointed at me!” He laughed, “But I sure as hell am glad that nobody’s shot at me!” He glanced at Shonna, barely able to see her face from the dim light of the dashboard. “At least not yet.”
     They both laughed out loud.
     “So Joel warned him I was fake?” Shonna didn’t answer. “Joel.”
     “Yep.”
     “You knew it.” He remembered again when someone asked about the congressman’s aids in the meeting when she jumped in to deflect the question.
     She glanced at him, turned looking forward to the road. She knew what he was thinking. “I told you I didn’t want you to be nervous when he was coaching you.”
     “But you had him coaching me…” his voice trailed off. They drove for another ten minutes, “You did that deliberately to let him into the investigation, you set him up!”
     “Yep.”
     She continued. “I knew there was absolutely no way to fool him with your impersonation, so I decided to let him feel like he’s one of the good guys, maybe at the same time make him start doing desperate things as he starts feeling the jaws closing on him and the whole operation.”
     “And we just found out that he’s the main man!” he said with a big smile.
     “Yep, quite an evening there, mister congressman!”


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Magic Town, Chapter 19


Jeff, finds himself in Atlanta wanting to get out of the hotel on a Friday night. In the Atlanta Underground he meets up with Pick, a sly con man who takes Jeff around the Underground ending up at the notorious Magic Town strip club. There’s only one problem: Jeff is the spitting image of a corrupt congressman! Nancy, the beautiful FBI agent with the golden eyes takes Jeff on the ride of his life. With three climax scenes, this story will make you want to get to the next page!


Chapter 19 of Magic Town ...

Sunday, 3:35 PM: Reluctant Shooter

The team speculates about what is happening here and at the word “Inside” spoken by Antonio. As the discussion turns to squabbling Jeff is certain they are missing something. They figure out that the victims knew and trusted the shooter! And that the shooter wasn’t a professional, maybe even reluctant! Finally as the meeting ends Shonna turns to Jeff and says that it is time for them to turn him into a prick.


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           Magic Town, Chapter 19





Sunday, 3:35 PM: Reluctant Shooter

     “Inside,” Arnie said slowly, stoking his chin. Everyone around the table stared at Arnie. “Does that mean there’s an inside guy, a double cross?” Arnie frowned. “Jesus, like we don’t have enough problems.”
     The same group was sitting around the conference table in the safe house except for one unfamiliar face who spoke out, “What’s he doing here?” pointing to Jeff. “Why do we have a civilian here?”
     Shonna looked dismissively at the woman who spoke out, “You weren’t here this morning. This guy is our hero. You would not believe what this poor bastard has been through.” She scowled at the woman. “His face does look familiar, doesn’t it? You DO KNOW who is at the center of all this. You DID READ the case data. WE ASSUME!” She rubbed her forehead looking up again, “The plan we’re working came from him YOU IDIOT! Why don’t you just SHUT THE HELL UP AND LISTEN!” Jeff felt the ring in his ears return from Shonna’s screaming next to his right ear. She looked to Arnie, “Arnie help me!”
     He nodded to Shonna turning to the woman, around to everyone at the table, back to her, his hands raised toward the room, “Look, everyone’s nerves are really raw here. A hell of a lot has happened in the last couple days. I am sure Agent White here didn’t mean to yell at you, maybe she did, but seeing all these dead bodies has really put us on edge, the scale of this whole operation, having no clue who the shooter is has made us all…well…a little crazy.” He gave the woman a condescending smile, “So if it’s okay with you, let’s move on.” The woman nodded sheepishly with her eyes cast down at her hands folded on the big table in front of her.
     The next ten minutes was filled with speculation as the evidence papers and photographs circulated around the table.
     Jeff was sipping a Coke from the can, dearly wishing it was alcohol.
     Hell, he’d even take bourbon.
     He sat listening to the conversation leaning, his head back, eyes closed.
     They must be missing something.
     They had to be missing something.
     Something.
     He watched the people sitting in front of him, the discussion turning into squabbling.
     Jeff spoke up, “Take them out all at once, we already have a plan to do that.” He looked around the faces at the table that became instantly quiet, “What’s so hard about that?” He frowned, “We don’t really have any new information since this morning other than more dead people, maybe Antonio who might come to long enough to give us a name.”
     Shonna looked at him, “We need to circle around to make sure we’re not missing anything.”
     Jeff glanced at his watch surprised to see it was almost two o’clock.
     Arnie finally spoke up, “Okay, guys, we’re losing daylight. Given what we knew before, who came out of that house that we weren’t expecting to see?”
     Someone said, “Everyone,” there was a small group chuckle.
     “Okay, but given this group, who didn’t we expect to see?”
     Shonna instantly replied, “Pick.”
     Jeff watched Yvonne write down the question and answer, she spoke. “It seems like we know a lot more now, except what happened in the house and Antonio’s room and the cash room.”
     Arnie spoke, “Okay, let’s figure this out.” He looked at Shonna. “Gun powder burns at the house?”
     “The congressman and the aid were point blank, covered in gun powder, straight at the entry points, but not the others, they were shot at a distance, don’t know how far, no powder though,” came a voice.
     Shonna looked quickly at Jeff, “Remember I noticed the powder burns on Antonio’s shirt.” She flipped two pages back on her notebook, “Easy when he was wearing white. And powder on the counting room guard. No powder on the two in the back of Antonio’s office, at least that I could see. None on the women downstairs.”
     Shonna looked up to the ceiling in thought. “That means that the shooter literally walked up to the main victims and shot them point blank.”
     Arnie’s and Jeff’s eyes met as they looked at each other, eyes widening exclaiming in unison, “They knew the shooter!
     “And they trusted him,” Shonna completed their sentence.
     Arnie pulled the drawing of the house across the table, studying it in front of him. “Wait, let’s not get ahead of ourselves. Let’s see if we can figure out the order.”
     A question arose: Was there only one shooter? Why couldn’t they hear shots?
     Shonna started, “Wait, the bullet!” She pulled out the blood encrusted bullet from her pocket that she pulled from Antonio, passing it around.
     One of the agents held it to the light, “Nine millimeter. That means a gun that can hold at least thirteen shots.”
     “Or more depending on the make and model,” someone interjected.
     “This is good,” Arnie smiled. “This means all those shots in the house could come from one gun without a reload. Probably at the club, too.”
     The agent holding the bullet frowned, “Feel the weight, light alloy. This came from a low velocity round.”
     “What does that mean?” Jeff asked.
     “It means they used a silencer. A silencer only works with low velocity bullets. Sub-sonic. It’s the bullet breaking the sound barrier that causes the bang.” Jeff thought about this, nodding.
     “That’s why even at close proximity only one round made it through Antonio’s vest otherwise there would be no way his vest could stop a full-charge nine millimeter round at such a close distance. At that close range the bullet just has way too much force. Would punch right through the plate. That makes perfect sense that it stopped four and only one got through.”
    “Yeah, even then it barely got through, I reached right inside of him and pulled this out with my bare fingers,” Shonna explained.
     Arnie got up heading for the door, “Let me make a phone call, I’ll be right back.”
     The group was mulling together when Arnie came back. “I just got off the phone and got confirmation that the shooter at the house used the same kind of bullets. Of course, we don’t have ballistics yet, but my guess is the same gun was used at the house and the club. Silencer, Shonna. That’s why you didn’t hear any shots yesterday.”
     “Wait!” Shonna flipped through her little notebook. “I forgot to tell you guys about the counting room when I went through it. First, that door is guarded twenty-four-seven, the guard is not even allowed to take a pee break.”
     Jeff reflected, “I remember seeing him when I was waiting for you on Friday night. There was a chair there, but he stood the whole time.”
     “Right, he can sit only when nobody is in the hall.”
     Shonna flipped through her little notebook going on to say that there were three women in the counting room when they heard a commotion at the door, what sounded like someone being pushed against the door outside. One of the women, “Shelly, who is a sweetheart, but a real nervous nelly.” A sad expression flashed across her eyes, “She ducked down when the door flew open. She didn’t see anything, said she could hear four what sounded like snaps, she said it was like those little confetti toys that you pull the string on and confetti shoots out, you know that little snapping sound.”
     “That’s what we thought, right? A silencer.” Arnie looked at Jeff with an expression like a tutor, “Silencers aren’t completely silent, they still make a small snapping sound like the girl heard.”
     “The other girls were killed.” Shonna paused in quiet.
     “What happened next?” the question came.
     “Shelly said that they had stacks and stacks of money out, that she expected it was a robbery. But instead all she heard was the file cabinets opening, the noise of papers and boxes. There were whispers, men she was pretty sure, more than one, but she’s not sure how many, said she couldn’t tell the voices.” She flipped the page. “We don’t know for sure, it looked like no money was taken, but every single page of the collections and payment records were gone. Not a single page left behind.” She flipped the notebook closed, “Like they knew exactly what they were looking for.” She looked around the table. “They knew too much. This was an inside job!”
     Arnie stroked his chin, “Yes, of course. Inside. Just like Antonio said. They didn’t care about the money, they only cared about their asses. Jesus, all those people at Magic Town killed just so they could get the records.”
     Jeff remembered the drawer that held the records they took last night laying in the corner of Antonio’s office.
     Arnie picked up the drawing of the house, pulling over the layouts of Magic Town and the house with the bodies drawn in, laying them side-by-side. He leaned forward pointing to the house drawing, “Okay, let’s try this starting with the house. The congressman is separated from his aid and body guards. Probably because of guns or the shooter convinces them it’s okay to be separated, we can’t tell. Maybe the mayor or somebody wanted to talk to him in private. Still, we don’t know. The shooter walks into the room with the three, gets the guard on the right,” as he pointed to the page, “the one on the left draws his gun but too late, we found his gun next to him. The shooter is standing in front of the aid, shoots her point blank.” Silence from the group watching his fingers on the page. “He goes into the other room, walks right up to the congressman or it could have been reversed. Still, point blank.” He glanced down at a list of names with the times from the photos, pointed to the page with the Magic Town layout. “My guess is pretty similar with Antonio. Why change what works?”
     Jeff reflected, “Antonio put on body armor. He was going to meet with someone that he knew. Knew but didn’t trust. The shooter got close to him, we know, so Antonio knew this person but definitely didn’t trust him or he wouldn’t be wearing it.” Jeff remembered Antonio’s words from last night, “I remember last night he said, ‘Why would you go around in body armor unless you thought that there was going to be trouble?’ He knew the shooter but he thought that there could be trouble!”
     Arnie nodded in deep thought. “Yeah, I need to amend my script with this important little detail.” He looked at Jeff nodding, “That’s very perceptive. Good!”
     “So Yvonne, can we start a what-we-know column?”
     “I’m way ahead of you. I also have entries for what we’ve guessed.”
     Jeff smiled, “Guys, this is great.” The whole room smiled at him, for the first time he realized they were smiling at him without condescension.
     A voice came out, “What about the congressman’s staff?”
     Shonna gave a noticeable jolt, “They’re all good guys, let’s focus on what’s at hand.” Jeff noticed the changed pitch of her voice, turning to look at her, she ignored him.
     Shonna looked back at the page. “But who? Who’s the shooter?” Shonna looked at Jeff, “That means Snake Arm and his buddy probably couldn’t have done it. Nobody would have let them get that close to them. We saw them come out of the house last, but there’s no way they were the shooters. They couldn’t have been.” They heard Yvonne’s pen writing.
     Jeff half held up his hand, “But what about Pick––”
     “Pizza!” came from the other room as everyone instantly stood up filtering toward the dining room where they sat to eat, chatting about everything but the case.
     Shonna looked at Yvonne as they sat down again twenty minutes later. “Okay, Yvonne, tell us what we know.” Looking around the room she continued, “Then we need to take some votes.”
     “Votes?” Jeff laughed.
     “Surprised?” Yvonne smiled at Jeff. “You don’t see that on TV, do you? But that’s how we do it sometimes.” Seeing Jeff’s puzzled look, “It prevents one person from driving the solution, group think is always better.” She went on to read her notes which Jeff was surprised at how detailed and well-ordered they were.
     Arnie raised his hand, “Okay people, we need to wrap this up. The way I see it is we need a snitch, a shooter, the daily operations guy, and the strategist who could also be our king pin.”
     Shonna stood up. “Okay. First vote. Insider. Snitch. I nominate Pick.” A few hands shot up immediately as people looked around at each other, slowly other hands came up until they were all raised. Jeff raised his hand uncertain about Pick as the snitch, not sure if he had a vote in this anyway. Arnie signaled to him that he should raise his hand if he wanted to vote.
     “Noted,” said Yvonne as she scribbled.
     “Second, one shooter at each scene, same shooter at both scenes.” All hands rose immediately.
     “Third,” Shonna bent over looking at Yvonne’s notes as Yvonne spun the page around toward Shonna, “The victims knew and trusted the shooter.” All hands were raised.
     Arnie leaned over to Jeff quipping, “Any more insights from Sherlock Holmes?”
     Jeff turned to him, laughed, “Well there’s always his most famous saying, do you know it?” Arnie shrugged. “You’ve heard it before, I’m sure, the dog that didn’t bark in the night.”
     Someone leaned across the table, “Yeah, I remember that, what story was it?”
     Jeff tried to remember, “You know, I don’t remember, but it was a clue Holmes got from the fact that for the particular crime scene the dog should have been barking. As I recall, that led Holmes to realize it was someone the dog knew, not a stranger who committed the crime.”
     “Yeah, well, we’ve already figured that out right?”
     “That wasn’t the gist of the Holmes story, though, it was about something that didn’t happen, it had nothing to do with knowing the person or not. It was about what didn’t happen.
     Arnie looked to the ceiling, “Something that didn’t happen. Something that we would expect from the crime,” turning to Jeff, “like something we should have expected to happen but didn’t happen.”
     Jeff nodded. “Exactly. But in this case what would it be?” He stared blankly out the window at the bright sunshine in the back yard. “There’s maybe something like that here.”
     Shonna looked annoyed at Jeff and Arnie’s chatter, that they weren’t paying attention to her. “Fourth, the shooter is––”
     “Wait!” Jeff stood up. “The dog that that didn’t bark in the night!” Everyone’s head swung toward Jeff. “I know you guys are sick of hearing about Sherlock Holmes, but hear me out!” He looked down at Arnie speaking slowly, “Arnie here made me remember that line from the Holmes stories. Let me see if I can remember,” he paused looking up in thought. “We’ve been looking at what happened, not at what didn’t happen!” Blank faces around the table except for Arnie’s expectant gaze. Jeff nodded toward Arnie, “He asked me a question and suddenly I realized this!” Jeff gave Arnie a thankful smile. “And then something occurred to me!”
     The room was quiet, all eyes on him. “The shots were all torso shots!” Nods around the table. “Wouldn’t a professional shoot people in the head? I mean,” he rummaged among the papers on the table, finding a page scanning it, “what kind of hit man shoots the congressman four times, shoots Antonio five times, four shots into his aid in the house, I mean I don’t know about the others,” turning to Shonna.
     Shonna looked at the ceiling doing a tally in her head. “Yes, all multiple torso shots.” She looked up approvingly at Jeff still standing, “You are RIGHT! The person doing the shooting wasn’t a real hit man!” She leaned over, cupped her face in her hands for a few seconds, looked up. “These people were killed by someone they knew. The shooter couldn’t bring himself to raise the gun to their faces! We already know that he did it point blank. It’s almost as though the shooter was apologetic, didn’t really want to do it.” She looked around the room, “Jeff, this is really good! The shooter wasn’t a pro! But I mean…does that make sense?”
     Arnie stood up slowly in thought, “Yes, apologetic, I like that,” looking at Shonna, “good, that means we’re dealing with someone who probably has never killed before otherwise he would know that you don’t have to go spraying all those bullets around like that. A pro wouldn’t care, it would just be BOOM! One shot to the head and goodbye!”
     Jeff frowned thinking about all the bullet spraying he had done just a few hours before, filling that door with so many holes. He had done it reluctantly, in the heat of the moment it just happened. He remembered what happened today, how hard that first shot was. How difficult it was to pull the trigger the first time. As soon as that first bullet left the gun how easy it was to pull it four more times.
     “No, he was more than just apologetic,” Jeff said in a low voice as all eyes turned to him. “Reluctant. Like I was when I was shooting through that door today.” He felt a chill run down his arms as he remembered, pausing trying to find the right words, tears welling, “The first bullet was so hard, I mean so hard, but when I shot that first one the others just kind of kept coming. The first shot felt like it was impossible to do, but the others just came streaming out.” He looked around the table at anxious faces, wiping his eyes with the backs of his hands. “That’s our shooter. Reluctant.”
     “Jesus, Jeff, this is good, really good!” Arnie spoke softly stroking his chin. “This really adds up that it was not a professional, obviously, but even better, someone who was just following orders. Reluctantly.” There were approving nods passed around.
     “This is really good, congressman, but we’re losing time. This information makes only makes it even more obvious to me that for the shooter we should nominate Pick.”
     She stood up as though making a formal announcement, “So fourth, I nominate Pick as the shooter.” Jeff looked around as hands were slowly raised.
     He kept his hand down.
     He shook his head, “Sorry, I can’t do Pick as the shooter.”
     “Why, because you think you know him?” Shonna replied almost angrily.
     “I’d like to think I’m a little better judge of character, I mean I know he’s a felon and all––an unconvicted felon––but I just don’t buy it. I mean I saw those people coming out of the house. I know that we said the people needed to know the shooter, but I would rather pick someone like Snake Arm. Pick just doesn’t strike me as the follows-orders kind of guy in this situation.” He shrugged, “I know Snake Arm doesn’t fit the model of people knowing him so he could get close. I just can’t buy it. Sorry, but I can’t buy Pick as the shooter.”
     Yvonne noted one abstention.
     Shonna shrugged, “Okay, tactical guy, operations. I nominate Antonio.” All hands raised.
     Jeff smirked, “That was easy, he told us!” Shonna shot him a disapproving glower.
     “Strategist and maybe our main man.” Shonna finally continued looking around the room. “I nominate nobody.” She half-grinned, “Or everybody.” All hands were raised. Yvonne scribbled. “One thing for sure, put this down, this business was probably mostly conducted at Magic Town, but we never saw these characters coming in and out because they were using a tunnel from the warehouse next door!” She turned to Arnie, “By the way Arnie, can you get someone down to city hall first thing tomorrow to tell us who owns that building?” He nodded as Yvonne’s pen scratched.
     Shonna looked around to everyone. “And last that our Sherlock Holmes plan still stands for tomorrow as our best strategy.” All hands shot up except Jeff’s as heads turned to him, he felt a flush. He raised his hand with a timid smile.
     Shonna looked at her watch. “Okay, almost four-thirty. Next, show time coming up! Do we have all the unit support set up?” Nods from two men at the table. “I don’t expect surprises tonight, but with this group god knows.” She turned to Arnie, “Are you good to go for one of our little visits tonight? Pretty sure we’re going to need you.” He was just standing, turned to her with a smiling thumbs-up.
     She clapped her hands twice loudly, “Okay, let’s go.”
     As they were leaving the conference room, Jeff walked into the operations room which had many fewer people. It was beginning to get dark outside. Jeff went up to Shonna to ask if he could step outside for some air. She motioned to the agent who had guarded him before, leaned toward Jeff, “You’ve got ten minutes.”
     “What happens in ten minutes?”
     “We have to turn you into a prick.”

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