Tuesday, May 29, 2012

Magic Town, Chapter 7

Jeff, finds himself in Atlanta wanting to get out of the hotel on a Friday night. In the Atlanta Underground he meets up with Pick, a sly con man who takes Jeff around the Underground ending up at the notorious Magic Town strip club. There’s only one problem: Jeff is the spitting image of a corrupt congressman! Nancy, the beautiful FBI agent with the golden eyes takes Jeff on the ride of his life. With three climax scenes, this story will make you want to get to the next page!


Chapter 7 of Magic Town ...

Saturday, 6:12 AM: The Stakeout

Jeff has discovered that he is the absolute spitting image of the crooked Congressman, Frank Schedz, and Nancy has convinced him to play along. Now he follows her along to a stakeout at six in the morning looking for the Congressman so Jeff can deliver a message to him. He learns more about this beguiling woman as she sits with binoculars pressed to her eyes watching the house with two porch lights. Soon a parade of characters, the mayor, police chief, city council members and others come out of the house only to be followed by the signal that something has gone very wrong!

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           Magic Town, Chapter 7

Saturday, 6:12 AM: The Stakeout

   Shonna reached into her purse pulling out a five, tossing it onto the table. They walked through the door, crossing the dark street to the blue Mustang. Jeff walked around to the passenger door. Shonna opened the trunk pulling out a sport bag, walked to the driver’s door, climbed in. She opened the bag, pulled out a pair of very long binoculars and a Nikon camera with the longest lens Jeff had ever seen.
     “Tools of the trade,” she said, turning to lay them on the back seat. Putting the key in the ignition, they pulled away from the curb.
     In only a few minutes the car was pulled over in a neighborhood a lot like the other they had been in earlier, filled with cars all parked helter-skelter, now with a few lights on in the house windows.
     “See that yellow house with the two lights on the porch way up there?” Jeff craned his neck forward trying to see which house she was talking about, nodding that he thought he knew the one. “Well here’s the deal, you got a few Z’s last night, so I need an hour or so. I doubt there will be any traffic yet, but here,” she reached back, grabbed the binoculars handing them to Jeff, “keep an eye on that house, if anyone comes in or out, wake me. Wake me in an hour no matter what.”
     Jeff took the binoculars, inspecting them. He had never seen such a nice pair before, focus, zoom, very nice. He looked through them, that door with two lights over it looked like he could reach out and touch the doorknob. He instantly heard Shonna’s even breathing, very impressed that she had managed to go to sleep so fast. He also knew she had been up all night.
     He watched that door intently for an hour. Nothing happened.
     He leaned forward looking up through the windshield watching great gray hands in the heavens slowly pulling the crescent moon back up into the darkened sky, daylight timidly touching the horizon with the slightest golden rim.
   Finally, he jostled Shonna who woke so fast it startled Jeff, “What, anything?”
   He replied that nobody came or went. She turned the key to look at the car’s clock, seven twenty.
     She took the binoculars from him, peering through them suddenly sitting up straight muttering to herself, “Good job, Nancy!”
     Nancy?”
     “It’s Shonna to you!” she gave a sly sideways smile. “Okay, Nancy, but it’s Shonna and please don’t blow it. If these guys think they’ve been infiltrated there’ll be hell.” He looked back at her with a wry grin. “I mean it! It’s Shonna. I told you these guys can get dangerous. When you meet my team they will all be calling me Shonna. It’s too damned easy to make the slip and it’s too dangerous to let it happen.”
     Nancy. Nice. It suits you.” She gave him a glancing smile peering through her binoculars again.
     “So what did you just see?”
     “Mayor’s chief aid just drove up. Yep, congressman’s there. Got to be.”
     “Why don’t you just go in and get him.”
     She grunted, “No thanks, nice way to get shot for sure. Any idea how many guns are in there?” She watched intently, silent.
     He watched her, turned his head toward the house, could see nothing.
     “So how involved are you in this case?”
     “This case? It’s my case.”
     “Your case?”
     “Accidental, really,” she glanced at him sitting in the passenger seat next to her.
     “How is it your case accidentally?”
     “I’m the one who found the first loose thread and just started following it.” He listened, leaning toward her.
     “I lived in Georgetown while I was in grad school.”
     “I thought you went to Brown.”
     “I did for my undergrad, did my masters at George Washington in DC. Lived in Georgetown, bit of a hustle to the university but what a great neighborhood.”
     Georgetown? Isn’t that a little pricey for a student?”
     She smiled, “Yeah, funny how things work out. I took a room. An old woman, you wouldn’t believe her name.”
     Jeff thought, smiling, “No, don’t tell me!”
     She laughed softly, “Yep, with an O and two N’s.” Jeff laughed thinking that spelling had to come from somewhere. “It’s the Irish spelling of the name. Anyway, I lived there for two years. We became good friends. She was in her eighties, was declining pretty fast toward the end, couldn’t leave the house. So I started doing little errands, pretty soon was doing all the errands, grocery shopping, that sort of thing. She had a part-time housekeeper who would come in and cook and do laundry, but I did the rest of the housekeeping, taking care of her.” She reflected. “It wasn’t bad, really. It was good, it fit perfect with my school schedule. She was really nice to me, always interested in my studies.”
     She adjusted the binoculars keeping them pressed to her eyes. “Anyway, she died. It turns out she had no family, at least that she knew of. I never knew what that really meant, whether they didn’t speak to each other or what, but nobody except a couple of old people who lived in the neighborhood ever came to visit. No Christmas cards or anything. Turns out she left me the house in her will.”

     “Wow, that doesn’t happen every day. That was pretty lucky.”
     “Yeah lucky, a poor little grad student with a big house right in the middle of Georgetown. And a nice bit of money, too. Got to pay off my student loans with money left over. But it wasn’t all a completely clean deal.”
     “Why, what happened?”
     “About six months after everything was settled I get a call from a guy saying that he was her grandson who started asking all sort of questions. Next thing I know I’m getting a letter from some attorney saying he was contesting the will.”
     “I guess you would have to expect something like that, right?”
     “Yeah. At first I wasn’t sure and started thinking that maybe he was right, that he should have something from his grandmother. Then the next phone call he started getting really jerky. Really hostile. So I got to thinking where was he on the holidays, where was this guy when I was emptying her bedpans and wiping her butt? The more I thought about it the madder I got. I mean you don’t know me very well, but when I think something is mine I go after it and I won’t let anyone take anything from me! Nobody!”
     “So what did you do?”
     “I asked around the agency and everyone said that there is one rule in lawsuits: always make sure your attorney is better than theirs. So I got the name of one of those, you know, really high-powered attorneys you read about in the newspapers who was recommended by my boss’s boss who told me to call this guy and mention his name. I just kind of held my breath because there was no way I could pay for a three-hundred-dollar an hour guy. So I told him about the situation, next thing I know I am getting copies of letters sent back and forth between him and the grandson’s attorney, then nothing.” Jeff watched her in anticipation. “Finally I got my nerve up to call this attorney, ask him what happened, how much I owe him. He came on the line, said the other guy lost his nerve and didn’t I read his letters? I said no, not really, so he told me to go look at the letters and I would see that we threatened to counter sue them. They went away. Well, I was really happy and all, but when I asked him how much I owe him he kind of laughed, said not to worry that it wasn’t that much work, that he did it as a favor for my boss’s boss. Seems his firm gets a lot of business from the agency.”
     They both laughed together, Jeff grinned, “Boy, so you were one really well-connected student and didn’t even know it, huh? Did you ever go back to read the letters?”
     She glanced at him, “Yeah, and what made them go away was my attorney’s threat to counter sue and to have the grandson charged with elder neglect! I mean how could this guy pop out of the middle of nowhere trying to get his hands on the estate when he never even bothered to send a Christmas card!”
     “So that’s what they meant when they said to get a better attorney!”
     “I guess so, but it sure was good advice, huh?”
     “How is it that someone your age was in graduate school? Isn’t that the thing people do in their twenties?” She gave him a sideways glance, “Not that you’re not in your twenties!” They both laughed together as she squeezed the binoculars back to her face.
     “Oh, I don’t know, I just kept going in and out of school, each time not finding anything that really got my attention until I happened to take a criminal law class and, well, it just lit me up.”
     She glanced at him, “Isn’t that what you did?” He frowned that she somehow knew this little factoid about him.
     “So how does this all fit into this case?”
     “Well, it seems the congressman happened to have a house in Georgetown. It was on my walk to the university. A couple times I saw him as I was walking by. No big deal, you saw all sorts of government people on that side of town.”
     She pulled the binoculars down rubbing her eyes, held them back up. “Anyway, I started to notice more and more, how would I say it,” she paused in quick thought, “let’s say non-Georgetown types more and more going in and out of his house. A few times I kept seeing the same black man, a big guy who seemed to go through cycles of hanging out at this congressman’s house, so I got curious. I took the license plate of the car he was in one time, contacted the limo company, found out he was the mayor of Atlanta.”
     Jeff nodded, listening intently as she continued, “I was doing my internship at Department of Justice which gave me access to just about any kind of data that could help me figure out if anything was going on.” She glanced at him, “I don’t know, there was just some kind of gut feel that something wasn’t right. So I started doing all the usual checks, you know, income, tax returns, bank accounts, property records, things like that, all the stuff I could get really easy.” She shook her head slowly, “It didn’t add up.” Jeff cocked his head listening. “I mean, how does a guy who makes eighty four thousand a year as mayor live in a three million dollar house, drive three Mercedes, and have a country club membership? This guy was rolling in dough.”
     “Well, I suppose…” Jeff pondered, though he really had no clue.
     “And none of it come through his bank accounts?” She shook her head just slightly, not to lose her gaze on the house.
     “Anyway, I was just finishing school, took a position with the FBI, got too busy to do anything about it at first, I just kind of forgot about it for a year as I was getting my feet wet at the agency. So one day I happened to walk by his house and there’s the mayor coming out of the congressman’s house again. So I went to my chief, told him about it and what I had discovered before. I was expecting him to say thanks to watch him hand it to another agent, but instead he appointed me as a co-lead agent and hooked me up with an older colleague who decided this was going to be my case, used it more like a way to mentor me.” She turned to him with a satisfied smile going back to her binoculars, “Soon my mentor just kind of backed out of the case and there I was, lead agent by default!”
     “Wow, that’s quite a story. So this is your case.”
     She glanced at him with a nod. “That was two years ago. I’ve been on this case since. I figured the congressman has been involved for four years, a year before I discovered it, the year while I let it be, and two years since.”
     Jeff watched this woman sitting next to him. He couldn’t see her captivating eyes looking at him as he suddenly felt a wave of deeper understanding of this woman, a warm flow over his body trickling over his head, through is hair like a warm shower onto his shoulders, washing down around his back as he felt a warm flush across his chest, feeling his face turning flush. He was glad she was looking into her binoculars and not at him that moment.
     “So you said I am going to be doing some kind of talking sense into somebody.”
     She glanced sideways to him quickly, back to the binoculars. “Yes, I believe he’s in that house, but we need to make sure he’s alone. This is going to be a very serious talk.”
     “What am I supposed to be saying to this person?”
     “Well, you’re not exactly going to be doing the talking, more like delivering a message.”
     “What kind of message?”
     “That it’s time to straighten up and fly right. Look, don’t worry about that right now, I’ll fill you in when the time comes.”
     They sat in quiet, Jeff squinting in the morning light to see the house. “Oh, good,” she said softly, “sweet.”
     “Update?”
     “No, false alarm, that’s not who I thought.” She kept the binoculars clutched to her face. “So did Pick get you at the ATM next to Ricky Rocket’s?”
     “Why?”
     “Good. He just walked back out of the house.”
     “Yeah, Rickey Rocket’s. How did you know?”
     “I swear every lonely white business guy must go to that ATM at least once in his life. You wouldn’t believe the people he hauls to Magic Town.”
     She adjusted the binoculars, “But I wonder what he’s doing there?”
     Jeff got a hurt expression, “People, as in other guys? As in lots of them all meeting up with Pick at that ATM?”
     “Yep.”
     “That’s his routine?”
     “Yep. Always the same. Let me guess, you bought him drinks and dinner, then followed him over to Magic Town and you spent how much there? I saw you spreading a lot of money around. He’s the best pick pocket in Atlanta. How much money did he get from you?”
     Jeff reached into his pocket pulling out twenty-two dollars doing a little arithmetic in his head, “Two hundred and something, maybe two hundred ten dollars.”
     She adjusted the binoculars again, “Who’s that with him? Hmmmm. All that cash plus your credit card, drinks and dinner, tips of course, always really big tips, right?”
     Jeff stared at the money in his hand, “God, maybe three hundred dollars! He did it all with a smile! And I smiled the whole time too!” He chuckled to himself. “Well, I’ll be damned, I’m the best Mark in town, huh?”
     “Yep. He’s the best pick pocket in Atlanta. Not a police report in sight.”
     “Well, I’ll be god damned. Three hundred dollars.” He looked up at the car ceiling laughing out loud, “Pick!”
     She laughed with the binoculars to her eyes. “Your common street mugger may get what, fifty bucks? A hundred? And a night in jail for all his trouble! Yep, Pick’s definitely a star when it comes to his style of pick pocketing white guys standing at that ATM.” She frowned with an intent voice, “Well there they go, but who was that other guy?”
     Jeff laughed again, “Does he work for your agency?”
     “Nope, he’s a free agent.”
     “But you pay him?”
     “A few thousand. He is an extra set of ears and eyes for us, nothing strategic. But I trust him and he has given us some really good inside information. Plus,” she glanced away from her binoculars, “he keeps dragging all you businessmen to Magic Town and we end up with people like you!” They both laughed, Jeff suddenly realizing why him being the only white guy in the club didn’t create any stir last night. Evidently it meant that Pick had just found another Mark. He smiled at this explanation for why all the chairs at his table at front of the runway filled so quickly!
     She shushed him adjusting the zoom on the binoculars. “What the hell are these guys all doing up so early? On a Saturday? There’s something really big going on here.” She put down the binoculars, rubbed her eyes picking them up again, looking up and down the street. “Oh, Christ, please no.”
     “What,” Jeff strained to look down the street, “what?”
     “There’s an unmarked up the block watching.” She sighed. “Protection.”
     “Protecting what?”
     “The mayor’s assistant left. That must mean the mayor is in there, no other reason to have a watch. Don’t worry,” smiled Shonna, “they are about to leave.”
     “Leave?”
     “Yep, his honor is just coming out. Oh, god, the chief, too. Hand me the camera.” Jeff reached back handing it to Shonna, she set the binoculars in her lap. In less than a second the camera started clicking and whirring with the auto-winder. Silence. More clicking, whirring. “Jesus, what are all those guys doing there? What the hell is going on? What are they all doing here?”
     “Who all?”
     “The mayor, vice mayor, two, no, three council members, the police chief, two others, look like captains. God almighty, in uniforms even, arrogant pricks, what’s wrong with these guys? Is there a party going on in there? Why are they standing at the curb like that? What are they waiting for?”
     She watched intently. “Who they hell are they?
     “Who?”
     Jeff pulled the binoculars from Shonna’s lap holding them up to see two really big black men just coming out of the house, signaling to the mayor. “Smile boys,” Shonna smirked as the camera clicked and whirred a few times.
     “Wait, that tattoo!” Jeff adjusted the binoculars, “I saw him last night at the club!” He heard three clicks and whirs.
     “The mayor’s turning to get into his car,” she said quietly.
     She paused, “Finally Perkins! Damn I thought he abandoned us! Here he comes driving up. Where you been big guy? Out of the car.” Long pause. “Good boy, Perk, wave to the nice mayor, grin, let them know you are there and you’ll play babysitter. Good boy.” Pause. “Waiting till they leave.” Pause. “Good. Now go into the house, signal us what’s going on, then come back out with your hands on your hips and we’ll come have our little chat with the congressman.”
     “Who is Perkins?” Jeff glanced at his watch noting the time.
     “The bouncer.”
     “The big guy from Magic Town? That guy?”
     Still peering through the camera she smiled, “You bet, he’s our eyes and ears there. Doesn’t miss a trick, has this like photographic memory for faces. He thought you were the congressman so that’s why he put you up front.”
     “I thought I got up there because of my tip.”
     “Oh, I’m sure he was glad to keep your money, but no.” Jeff remembered some of the things Perkins said to him, asking about his driver, remembering when he first came in and him saying even for you, sir.
     “So this Perkins, is he a cop, too?”
     “No, he works for the club. We manage to pay him more on the side but he doesn’t know anything about me, about Nancy, he thinks I’m just the stupid blonde bean counter, even though I not even blond. I am sure he wants to get into my pants.” She laughed, “Especially after last night!”
     Jeff gave her a sideways glance that she could sense even with the camera to her eye. Yeah, he thought to himself watching her sitting next to him, I’d like to get into your pants, too! He leaned back just a bit as he could picture her trim body that he’d seen last night at Magic Town, picture that beautiful body laying on some bed. He put that image on his hotel bed, her coaxing him with curling fingers. Him standing there admiring her, undressing with her saying things like what a manly man he was, giving a little shriek seeing him naked, Jeff approaching the bed…
     “Yeah, Perkins.” Jeff snapped out of his daydream turning to her. “He’s a good guy and he’s so big people are afraid to screw with him. That helps everyone in the club, especially me. Really keeps a lid on things. I really go out of my way to help him out when he needs. Got him out of a couple messes.”
     Jeff could hear Shonna breathing heavily as she watched through the camera so intently. She was waiting for something to happen. She motioned to him with her right hand, “Open the glove compartment.” In the glove compartment there was a police radio with a little red light zooming back and forth across the face.
     “Why don’t you guys use cellular phones?” He prided his Motorola clam phone the little four-inch square wonder that he carried. It was back in his suitcase because his company was getting all upset that his bill was running over nine hundred dollars a month. They were wanting him to refund his personal calls. The roaming charges were running up to two dollars a minute so he just figured out that pays for a lot of calling-card calls for a tenth of that.
     She nodded, “Cell phones are too unreliable. Can’t take chances. Maybe when they get the network built out, but we can’t take chances of no communication.” He nodded, she was right. He recalled a long phone conversation he had once while driving around Los Angeles that was done in seven segments as he drove, the line kept cutting out. That one call cost twenty eight dollars.
     “Hand me the microphone,” she motioned holding out her right hand, taking it holding it to her mouth. Still looking into the camera she clicked the side of the microphone, “Tom, you there?” There was an unintelligible crackling with a voice in there somewhere. Jeff couldn’t make out a word. “Good, yeah, Perkins will give the signal in a second. Then we can go in to have that talk with our little man, assuming he’s not passed out as usual.”
     Jeff assumed she was talking about the congressman, wasn’t sure as he glanced at his watch again, nearly two minutes had passed since Perkins went in.
     “She leaned forward, pressing the camera to her eye, “What’s taking him so long?” Another full minute passed, her breathing quickening. “Where is he? Where is he? What’s taking so long?”
     She gave a small sigh of relief, “Good, there he is.”
     Jeff glanced at the time again, four minutes had passed since he went in.
     “What’s he doing? He’s looking back into the door. He went back in again!”
     She threw the camera onto the back seat pulling the binoculars away from Jeff’s face while still holding the radio microphone. “Tom, here he comes out again, he’s just coming out! But what’s he doing, where’s the signal?”
     “He crossed his arms!” Clicking the mic she screamed, “OH, GOD, CROSSED ARMS! CROSSED ARMS! WE GOT TROUBLE! TOM! WE GOT TROUBLE! I’M GOING IN NOW! WAIT FOR MY SIGNAL!”
    “I’M GOING IN NOW!”

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Monday, May 28, 2012

Magic Town, Chapter 5

Jeff, finds himself in Atlanta wanting to get out of the hotel on a Friday night. In the Atlanta Underground he meets up with Pick, a sly con man who takes Jeff around the Underground ending up at the notorious Magic Town strip club. There’s only one problem: Jeff is the spitting image of a corrupt congressman! Nancy, the beautiful FBI agent with the golden eyes takes Jeff on the ride of his life. With three climax scenes, this story will make you want to get to the next page!




Chapter 5 of Magic Town …

Saturday, 12:48 AM: The House

Shonna takes Jeff along for a little ride to a seedy neighborhood somewhere in south Atlanta where he spends the next few hours sleeping on a dusty couch while others gathered at a small table keep looking back at him in disbelief, and where he
meets up with Pick again!


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           Magic Town, Chapter 5





Saturday, 12:48 AM: The House

     Jeff pushed his way around tables to the curtained door. He started to push through the curtain, the bouncer stepped in front of him, “Where you goin’? You caint go out there. Yo driver out there?”
     Jeff looked up at the black face towering over him, “Out. Back home. I don’t have a driver.”
     “What, did he leave? Dey’s no cabs out there, white boy could get himself hurt out there,” he scowled, “even you!”
     “Wait, yes, I do have a driver!” He looked up at the face towering over him, “I do have a ride!”
     The bouncer pulled back the curtain a bit, glanced through, got a signal Jeff couldn’t see, shrugged stepping aside, pulling the curtain back so Jeff could walk through with a thanks as he went.
     The curtain fell back. Jeff stood in the darkness, the music came up again THUMP THUMP THUMP THUMP, the chorus of men’s shouts rising, definitely fewer voices than before. Jeff stood in the dark of the short hall between the front door and black curtain with just the outline of swirling lights around the black curtain behind him, almost total darkness down the other direction of the short hall toward the front door with the side door to the right that went downstairs. He remembered Shonna’s words not to go outside so he guessed that he could feel trapped if he cared to. Somehow he didn’t feel trapped. Just kind of numb. Waiting.
     He was surprised at how sober he felt given how much he’d drank tonight. Shonna’s words shouted down from the runway came back to him, something about not screwing this up, how she wished he wasn’t here. Wonder what that all means? And who do people keep thinking I am? He shrugged it off as just something that came out of all the craziness in that god awful loud room with all those drunken men shouting, banging on tables, the alcohol-sloshed high spirits. Jeff smiled, nothing like beer and naked women to get a rise out of a room full of men!
     Suddenly two men burst through the front door, Jeff felt a rush of cool outside air gushing into the stuffy short corridor. The door closed behind them, they wordlessly pushed past Jeff to the curtain that was pulled back, twirling lights flooding into the small corridor. Even though they were both black, Jeff noticed a tattoo, a kind of twisted up snake on a right arm reflecting the light coming from the bar, gone as the curtain fell.
     Jeff heard a voice. He was trying to figure out where it was coming from when he saw light from a side door on the left side of the front entrance that he didn’t notice before, across from the door on the right he went through before. There was a woman’s silhouette in the doorway signaling to Jeff, he stepped to the door into a dimly lit hallway seeing Shonna walking, turning signaling him to follow her. They walked about thirty steps, turning left facing a long, dim hallway. They passed a closed door on the left with light around the edges, Jeff could hear faint laughing through the door, thumping music could still be heard ever so faintly, so much much quieter. Continuing for what seemed like another fifty steps they turned left again, went another thirty steps, on the right he saw Shonna open a door. Jeff felt the night’s coolness rushing into the stifling corridor.
     He stepped through the door emerging into the darkness, the night air feeling so good on his face coming out of the airless smoke-filled building, some kind of back parking lot, a couple flood lights on the building shining down. Jeff looked up, could see a few stars in the sky barely poking through the city lights. There was a group of men on the far side huddled together in the darkness, one glanced over, turned back to the group. Jeff followed Shonna winding through the cars until she went around the side of what looked like a Mustang, waving him to the passenger side. He sidled around the dark blue car opening the door.
     Settling into the seat, Jeff automatically reached for the seatbelt, latched it; Shonna laughed quietly at this fastidious man, she didn’t say anything, starting the car. Without a word, she pulled out of the parking lot, took a left heading through isles of tall dark warehouses. Soon they were driving through low houses with cars parked everywhere, everything crowded together. Even at this late hour there were people walking around or sitting on front porches or standing huddled in groups in the darkness occasionally turning to look as they passed.
     “Did you tell anyone where you’re staying?”
     Jeff was startled by her voice. He thought, saying no he was sure he hadn’t.
     “Good, they won’t know how to find you.”
     “Find me?”
     Shonna didn’t answer, soon the car slowed, she turned into a driveway that was blocked with cars. She slowly navigated around a car in the driveway steering up onto the lawn. Jeff looked out seeing there was no lawn, just a dirt patch in front of the house. He looked at the house, a tiny white building, light coming around drawn curtains.
     He saw her look at the light in the window frowning, shaking her head.
     “You live here?”
     Shonna laughed, “Yeah, if you can call this living. Pretty small, huh?” Jeff nodded with a frown. “You probably live in some big house with lots of sunshine and picket fences. I tell people my house is so small you can see all four sides at once.”
     Jeff laughed, “That’s funny!”
     “Yeah, well you gotta have a sense of humor when you live someplace like this. Best part is there is me and two whole families living here. I’m the only one with a room to myself.”
     “Really? Whole families live in one bedroom?”
     “Yeah, our little three-bedroom one-bath paradise. Eleven people.” Jeff didn’t answer looking around him, for the first time seriously starting to regret how the evening had progressed.
     The car engine stopped. Shonna stepped out. “Okay, we’re going in, but don’t say a word unless I tell you.” Jeff nodded, his attention fixed on the house. “Hope you like the couch, but don’t get used to it, you’ll be up in a few hours.”
     Jeff got out of the car following Shonna to the front door, looking down at the old rain-stained couch and ripped stuffed chair to the right of the door facing the street. She opened the front door to the sound of voices. There was a small chorus of greetings, she signaled Jeff to follow. When he walked into the room there was sudden silence, all eyes on him as he stepped uncomfortably into the room dimly lit with a single shaded lamp sitting on an end table with a broken leg, propped against the faded red couch for support, a second lamp hanging above a small table with four people sitting around it, all staring at him.
     Shonna shook her head at them, “I know what you’re thinking, but it’s not him.” She pulled up another mismatched chair, the others opening their circle as Shonna stepped over to sit down, pointing Jeff to the couch which he stepped over to, flopping down. He patted the couch on each side, small clouds of dust puffed up tickling Jeff’s nose.
     All faces were still turned toward him as Shonna smiled, “Something, huh? Whoda thought. Fell right into our laps.”
     Soon the faces were turned across the table, a quiet discussion ensued.
     The tiny room could have only be five paces across each way, a filthy stove covered with dirty pots and pans, a small refrigerator covered with children’s drawings, school photographs of small faces peering into the dim room. There was a small hallway at the back of the room on Jeff’s right with four doors, three closed, an open bathroom door.
     With voices so low Jeff couldn’t hear a word, the group huddled talking softly. Every so often one would glance over at Jeff as though he was somehow part of their conversation. He continued feeling uneasy. He sat listening intently, he couldn’t hear a word sitting there, suddenly feeling a wave of tired wash over him, he started to close his eyes, got up going into the bathroom to pee, too many beers. The bathroom was disgusting with rust stains in the sink, towels piled on the floor, a toilet that looked like it hadn’t been cleaned in a hundred years. He felt uneasy even about peeing into it fearing that something might climb up the stream to infect him with god knows what. At least it flushed.
     He stepped back out into the living room, sat back down on the couch leaning his head back. He was out like a light. 

     A loud laugh made Jeff jerk up his head. He looked around for a second trying to remember where he was. Pick’s face was hovering in front of his eyes, Jeff pulled back, “Pick!” The whole room burst into laughter, Jeff’s startled expression made them laugh another round again. “Wow, Pick! What are you doing here?”
     “I told you I’d catch up with you later!” Jeff shook his head trying to wake up, looked at his watch, glinting in the darkness to see a few minutes after three thinking to himself, “A couple hours sleep.”
     “Man, Pick. What are you doing here?”
     Pick laughed, “The question is, what are you doing here?”
     “I followed Shonna, or rather…Shonna drove me here.”
     Pick signaled Jeff to move over, flopping down on the low couch next to Jeff in a puff of dust, Jeff sneezed. “Bless you, brothah.” He waited for Jeff to stop sniffling. “Well, remember I promised you an interesting evening.” The words rung in Jeff’s ears; it seems that lots of people promised him an interesting evening. “Why didn’t you leave like a nice white boy and go back to your hotel?”
     Jeff paused, reaching for a reason. Any reason. There was no reason. “Well, I was having fun and just kind of missed the chance to leave, and then Shonna drove me here.” He rubbed his eyes smacking his lips trying to get the taste of stale beer out of his mouth. “Then I just kind of ended up here.”
     Pick chuckled smiling, turning to see waving coming from the table. He stood up to go over to the group at the table, Jeff flopped back against the couch. He could recall hearing the word “tomorrow” as he drifted off again. 

     “Hey, wake up!” Jeff startled again, looking up at Shonna, the room quiet, empty behind her. He glanced at his watch, after four-thirty.
     “What’s going on?”
     “We need to go pay someone a visit, we’ve got to go now.” Shonna reached down pulling on Jeff’s left arm, “Come on, sleepy man, time to wake up, we gotta go now.”
     Jeff stood up, stretched, yawning he followed Shonna out the door. In another minute he was in the blue Mustang again driving through streets crowded with cars, deserted of people, all the houses now dark. Not a soul to be seen.
     “Where are we going?”
     “To talk a little sense into someone, but first to get some coffee.”
     Jeff frowned. “What’s going on here, why are you taking me along with you? I mean, in a couple hours I could probably find a cab back to my hotel.”
     Shonna glanced at Jeff as she drove silently, Jeff could see she was choosing her words carefully. “Look, your coming along like you did…we didn’t plan it like this, but you came along…” She paused, paying attention to turning left with only one car on the street passing as she turned. “Let me ask you a question.”
     Jeff sat silent.
     “Have you ever been in trouble, like you got yourself in over your head and you’re not sure what to do?”
     “I’m kind of there now.”
     Shonna chuckled, “Okay, fair enough, but you can make it back to your hotel and fly back to wherever and it be all done, right? But let’s say you were somebody else and you got really involved in something that was really over your head and you felt like you were stuck.”
     He looked toward her as she drove, “You mean hypothetically.”
     “Yes, hypothetically.”
     “Is this something I did or something that happened to me?”
     “Let’s say it was something you did to start, but then things happened that made it really complicated and started getting all sorts of people involved and some of those people are not very nice.” She glanced at him. “Anything like that?”
     Jeff looked off to the high rises of downtown Atlanta in the distance still lit up, trying to think what she was saying. “No, my life’s not really that complicated.”
     “Well, sometimes people do get themselves into complicated things. When that happens, sometimes they just need someone to talk a little sense into them.”
     Jeff puckered his brow in the dark. “Sense?” He looked around trying to figure out where they were. “Okay, so someone needs to have some sense talked into them. But why do I have to come along?”
     “Because you’re the one who is going to be doing the talking.”
   

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Magic Town, Chapter 4

Jeff, finds himself in Atlanta wanting to get out of the hotel on a Friday night. In the Atlanta Underground he meets up with Pick, a sly con man who takes Jeff around the Underground ending up at the notorious Magic Town strip club. There’s only one problem: Jeff is the spitting image of a corrupt congressman! Nancy, the beautiful FBI agent with the golden eyes takes Jeff on the ride of his life. With three climax scenes, this story will make you want to get to the next page!


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Friday 10:08 PM: Magic Town

Soon Jeff is in Magic Town strip club pushing through the black curtain separating the bar from the entry hall, the tall doorman seeming to recognize Jeff seats him and Pick at a table in front of the long stage coming from the back wall. A minute later a dancer appears stripping as dollars rain upon the stage, the men around Jeff going crazy as he realizes he is the only white man in the club! Soon a stunning white woman appears on the stage, reluctant at first to take her clothes off as she dances. Hands push Jeff to the stage to give her a little encouragement only to have her yell down “What are you doing here? You're going to screw this up!” After she leaves the stage the doorman appears saying Jeff's presence is wanted in front of the dressing room…

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          Magic Town, Chapter 4

Friday, 10:08 PM: Magic Town

    Jeff looked around. There were cars everywhere with people milling around or standing together in tight groups in the darkness.
     In a couple more minutes they were walking through the front door into a short hallway absolutely dark except for an outline of light around a black curtain straight ahead which was soon pulled back, light bursting through on pulses of loud music with a raucous punchy beat––THUMP THUMP THUMP THUMP––the yelling of what sounded like a thousand men––laughing mixed with yelling mixed with the sounds of glass rattling, hands clapping, slapping on tables. A large black hand appeared on Jeff’s left, leaned over yelling in a deep voice, “TEN DOLLAHS, FIVE DOLLAHS EACH!” Jeff could barely hear the man’s voice over the racket, the tall man leaning forward speaking directly into Jeff’s ear apologetically, “Even fo' you, congressman.”
     Congressman? Jeff laughed to himself looking up to the face hovering over him, “What did you––”
     “Sorry, suh, but dems da rules. But you can have da best table,” he motioned to two men standing against the back wall, pointing to a table up front with a flicking motion.
     Jeff turned to look at this tall man, probably six-feet-six at least. Reaching into his pocket Jeff accidentally pulled out a twenty that was snatched from his hand followed by a stamp on the back of his hand, being pulled away from the curtain by Pick who began to lead them toward a table at the head of an elevated runway that ran from a black-curtained stage against the back wall into the bar area.
     “GOOD JOB! I KNEW HE’D LET YOU SIT UP FRONT!” Jeff stopped next to Pick watching two burley men walk from the back of the room right up to a table in front of the runway yanking the three men sitting at the table by their arms pushing them away, signaling to Pick to come over, a waitress looked over, running up to the table to clear bottles away, giving the table a quick sweep with a dirty towel.
     Jeff followed behind looking around him, the crowd of men yelling at the stage. It was deafening as Jeff looked up seeing a beautiful black woman come walking through curtains at the back of the stage––topless with her hands on her hips with a come-on expression that Jeff had never quite seen before.
     Jeff looked up at this female image before him on the stage, three feet off the floor, as she strutted out on something like one of those Super Model runways running out from the curtained stage, off-center to the room with him and Pick sitting in the larger half, the runway ending twenty feet from the stage.
     Jeff was stunned. “My god, I’m really at a strip joint!” was all Jeff could think laughing to himself how earlier he had so committed himself that he would definitely not want to go to a strip joint.
     He looked around him suddenly realizing that he was the only white man in the entire room!
     Jeff poked Pick’s shoulder, “I’m the only white guy in here!” Picked waved his hand dismissively with a big smile, pointing up to the dancer.
     He felt like his white face lit up like a big glowing candle even in the pulsing swirling lights on the stage, but everyone ignored him with their faces glued to the woman who was beginning to pull at the straps of her bikini bottom, her large breasts dangling over the table next to them, men walking up stuffing dollar bills into her bikini bottom.
     “OFF OFF OFF OFF!” the room was yelling. In answer to the taunting the dancer swished her skilled hand around her bikini snapping up a wad of bills, pulled at the strings on each side, her bikini bottom snapped away, held high in her right hand like some kind of trophy with a wad of money in her left hand, the room full of men going absolutely wild! The crowd went crazy with yells that made Jeff’s ears saturate with sound, the music went on THUMP THUMP THUMP THUMP with some woman’s voice singing words in the music somewhere that could have been Donna Summers, Jeff couldn’t hear over the clapping thumping yelling men.
     A man’s voice roared from the ceiling, “LET’S GIVE A HAND FOR LORETTA AND THROW A FEW MORE DOLLARS UP THERE FOR HER FINE PERFORMANCE!” a rain of dollar bills showered onto the stage, the music suddenly ending with Loretta picking up the last of the money scattered around the stage, thanking the room with small bows and waves, disappearing through the stage curtain.
     The loud music stopped, “WE’LL GIVE IT FIVE MINUTES AND THEN THROW A LITTLE MORE MAGIC OUT THERE!” Softer music started up. Jeff could actually hear voices around him.
     Jeff looked to the back of the room near a door, noticing a group of chairs filled by men sitting with no table in front of them, without drinks. He turned back, Pick was motioning to the waitress with a large circling of his finger, some sort of sign that she nodded at, turning away. He put his arm around Jeff’s shoulder, “Well brothah what do you think, huh?” Jeff turned around to the table, surprised that all the chairs at the table were suddenly filled as Pick pointed around the table rattling off names which replied with wide smiles directed to Jeff, a couple hands reaching across the table to shake Jeff’s hand, Jeff just nodding as Pick continued the introductions, though with all the loud voices and music he couldn’t hear a single name.
     Soon the waitress walked up with a tray full of Budweisers, distributed them around the table, leaned over to Jeff matter of fact, “Eight dollars.” Jeff reached into his pocket pulling out a ten, she turned, left without a word.
     “Remember what I said, brother,” Pick patted Jeff’s shoulder in a friendly way, “Tip good. Two dollars won’t make it, that’ll make her slow to serve us, okay?”
     Jeff laughed to himself. Ah, yes, the Mark.
     He looked around the room, the walls were painted dark blue. There were stars painted onto the ceiling, on the back wall there was a cartoon magician ten-feet tall pulling a cartoon rabbit out of a cartoon hat. Jeff laughed out loud poking Pick as he pointed to the back wall, “So we did see a rabbit coming out of a hat!” Pick nodded, they laughed out loud together.
     As Jeff gazed he noticed a wall filled with bottles on the right-front side of the room tucked into a small space maybe fifteen feet across. There were no chairs at the bar so he assumed it was the service bar for the waitresses. Suddenly he saw a door open on the left side wall behind the bar. Two large black men came through the bar, pushing through a swinging half-door from behind the bar into the room followed by a smaller man, looked Puerto Rican maybe, shorter than Jeff, wearing a white suit and very wide-brimmed white fedora. The look reminded him of the Panama look when he was a kid. The three huddled together with the man in white holding a piece of paper which he read from, pointing generally across the room at the men sitting on the chairs with no table. One of the men next to him nodded, took the paper from Panama Hat, walked over to the men with no table, leaning to talk to the men who huddled in to listen. When Jeff next looked, the men were gone leaving the row of chairs empty.
     Soon the loud thumping music started up as another black dancer came out onto the stage, the whole process repeated. Pick kept yelling at Jeff to throw money up onto the stage. Jeff reluctantly, carefully pulled out the wad from his pocket holding it under the table counting out ten ones. He waited a minute, the music thumped on. Finally when the stripper was completely naked he threw five ones, one at a time, onto the stage.
     Pick gave Jeff a thumbs-up turning his attention back to the stage.
     Soon the music faded as another thumpy song came on without the break they had last time, “NOW FOR A REAL TREAT GENTLEMEN! MAGIC TOWN GIVES YOU A RARE RARE TREAT! WELCOME OUR LOVELY SHONNA WHO TONIGHT IS HER VERY FIRST TIME ON STAGE!”
     Jeff was turned away when Pick poked at him pointing to the stage. Jeff turned around but instead of seeing a black dancer, there was the most stunning white woman pushing through the curtain at the back of the room. Blond puffy hair, trim figure, wearing a bikini bathing suit including the top. She seemed nervous, having trouble finding the rhythm of the music as she strutted across the runway in tall high heels, leaning over shaking her covered breasts over Jeff’s table. She looked intently at Jeff. Jeff stared blankly up at her, fascinated as she leaned over again as though trying to say something to him with her body, with her movements. She kept her eyes on him as she walked across the stage, scrutinizing him, her expression as though she was trying to say something to him.
     The place went wild!
     If Jeff thought it was loud before, now his hearing was inundated, his ears stuffed with big wads of sound fuzz being jammed pulsing into his ears. He was trying to watch her feeling a little embarrassed, suddenly becoming even more self-conscious about being the only white man in the room. A hundred-fifty screaming black men, only him and the dancer. Two flames glowing in the room of dark faces.
     Pick yelled something.
     “WHAT?” Jeff yelled back at Pick.
     Pick leaned in, “I SAID YOU’RE THE WHITE GUY, GET HER TO TAKE HER CLOTHES OFF!”
     “WHY ME?”
     “SHE’LL LISTEN TO YOU! ESPECIALLY YOU!” Jeff felt a dozen hands pushing him up to the runway. He walked around the table to the end of the runway, the dancer strutted up to him leaning over.
     “WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE!” she screamed.
     “THEY WANT YOUR CLOTHES OFF!” he yelled back handing her a ten dollar bill.
     “WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE!” she screamed again.
     “THEY SENT ME UP HERE TO TELL YOU TO TAKE YOUR CLOTHES OFF!” He handed her another ten. She turned away from him, in an instant she pulled off her top, flung it toward the curtain at the back of the stage. She spun around with a jerk facing Jeff, her body swaying to the music. Jeff was spellbound by her breasts in front of him, medium sized, small even that more jiggled than swung like the last dancers. She took Jeff’s two tens sticking them in her bikini bottom being careful that the bills would show.
     There was a loud, “BOOOOOOO” from the crowd directed at Jeff as he came back around to the table.
     “JESUS, NOW YOU DONE IT!” screamed Pick. Jeff shrugged. “THESE GUYS DON’T WANT TO GIVE 'EM TENS! WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING UP THERE?”
     “YOU TOLD ME TO BE GENEROUS!”
     “BUT NOT BIG BILLS FOR THE DANCERS YOU IDIOT!”
     Jeff looked helplessly around him, men were signaling him with thumbs down, hands cupped over mouths shouting sporadic boos, faces yelling at him but he heard no words over the music and noise. He figured he had to do something to get these guys back on his side so he impulsively reached into his pocket pulling out a handful of five-dollar bills throwing them onto the table. Hands rushed into the pile snatching the money as men stood up reaching to stuff them into Shonna’s bikini bottom. Jeff was sure that at least a few of them made it into her bikini though he saw a few disappearing into pockets. Pick gave a big smile with a thumbs-up motioning Jeff to do more.
     Jeff stood up with a twenty dollar bill in his hand raised for everyone to see as the room erupted into a chorus of, “OFF OFF OFF OFF!” Jeff walked around to the head of the runway, the music thumping on, the crowd of men screaming.
     Shonna walked over to Jeff, leaning down yelling just loud enough for him to hear, “COME SEE ME AFTER OR YOU’LL SCREW THIS UP!” She leaned way over snatching Jeff’s twenty with her teeth, standing she snatched the money stuffed into her bikini bottom, pulled at the strings on each side of her bikini as it fell away raising the money and bikini bottom over her head like a grand prize. Instantly there was a shower of one dollar bills with a couple fives from Jeff’s table raining onto the stage.
     Someone yelled out, “SHE’S NOT A BLOND!” as the men howled in laughter Jeff looked at Shonna’s dark pubic hairs just above his face, laughing just as loud.
     “LET’S GIVE SHONNA A BIG HAND GENTLEMEN––THIS WAS HER FIRST TIME ON STAGE AND YOU NEED TO BE GENEROUS SO WE CAN HAVE HER BACK!” followed by a final sprinkle of ones which were quickly swept up by the exiting Shonna though not quite with the finesse of the other dancers, the music went down, the lights came back up.
     “FIVE MINUTES GENTS AND THEN WE’LL BE RIGHT BACK!”
     By now the waitress had returned regularly bringing three more trays of drinks. Jeff made sure to send her away with five extra dollars each time. He felt a wave of tired come over him looking down at his watch surprised that it was nearly eleven-thirty.
     Jeff felt a firm tap on his shoulder, turning around to see the tall doorman standing over him, “Your attention is wanted in front of the dressing room.”
     “Dressing room?”
     Pick chimed in, “I bet it’s the white girl! Man somebody is gonna get lucky tonight!” The men around their table howled with delight that the white guy was going to get the white woman tonight!
     Jeff looked around for help from anyone, back at the doorman, “Dressing room?”
     Jeff felt enthusiastic hands pushing him to his feet again. He got to his feet walking across the room to follow the doorman through the black curtain, down the short dark hall toward the entrance, light appeared to the right of the front door, the doorman pushing open a door pointing through it down a stairway. “Go down and wait in front of the dressing room,” turned pushing past Jeff back through the black curtain. Jeff peered down the stairs, gingerly making his way down. At the bottom there was a corridor to the right. He turned seeing two blue plastic chairs in front of a door with a big cardboard gold star taped to a door on the left, a hallway with lime green chipped walls lit by two bare bulbs hanging from the ceiling. It was during a break in the bar, the music was low so it could barely be heard down here.
     As he stepped down the hall he noticed a tall black man standing in front of a door at the other end as though he was guarding the door there. Jeff tried to nod to the guard but got no response. He stepped forward sitting in one of the two blue plastic chairs in front of the big gold star. He glanced at the man at the other end of the hallway, wondering why he didn’t take a load off, just sit in the chair right next to him. Jeff noticed the man had a holstered gun, standing with a strange vacant stare, a tinge of fierce scowl. His eyes stared over Jeff’s head not once looking down to him.
     Soon the loud music upstairs started up again. Jeff could hear the THUMP THUMP THUMP THUMP through the ceiling as the men starting up their yelling. He could hear the sound of the announcer’s voice, couldn’t distinguish the words which was not surprising seeing as he could barely understand them when he was in the bar with the loud music, all the men yelling.
     He waited nearly twenty minutes before the door with the star finally opened. Shonna the dancer came out dressed in a red oriental design dressing gown. She was even more beautiful up close, her hair was actually a dark auburn, no, not really auburn. It reminded him of the dining room set in his aunt’s house, the color of dark cherry wood. Her bangs were neatly trimmed in a curve around her eyebrows tapering around her head covering her ears, coming to a nice round shape below the nape of her neck; he knew from his wife’s haircuts that this was attended to by an expensive hair stylist, not a cut you would get at the six-dollar hair cut joint in a shopping mall. It flashed in his mind to wonder if her hair was colored, but he remembered he had just seen her naked, that all the evidence pointed to it being her natural hair color.
     It didn’t matter because the effect was stunning.
     Her face was still flushed from her dancing. Jeff felt intimidated. He couldn’t tell her height, she was still wearing high heals, her complexion had a bit of an Irish flush that borrowed tone from her hair. She was a beautiful woman. What is it about beautiful women that he always found so intimidating? He guessed that every man must feel that way, especially when the woman is tall. He couldn’t really tell how tall she was in those shoes. That didn’t matter. He still felt intimidated.
     He remembered junior high school, his fascination with Amazon Women. His junior high school hosted a guest teacher who he later came to realize was a feminist before the word had even been invented. Maybe even a lesbian, of course he didn’t know anything about that back then either. She taught about Goddess worship of the pagan religions, about the women of Lesbos and the Amazon women. The Amazon women were incredibly fascinating to him. He had spent many a night in his bedroom playing with himself imagining that he had been kidnapped by a tribe of them, a hundred tall buxomly Amazons, where he was required to constantly give them sexual favors. And of course in his adolescent mind’s eye he could do so relentlessly until they were all laying fainted upon the ground from utter exhaustion, all from his enormous sexual prowess.
     But here was the real thing!
     He gulped.
     Beautiful.
     Scowling.
     She had stepped straight through the door with the big gold star. Without a word she stood in front of him, examining him intently. She pulled the blue plastic chair next to him around sitting backward in it facing him, her exposed thighs stuck out around the chair’s back as she sat looking straight into Jeff’s face. They could hear the thumping music, the faint racket of men yelling through the ceiling.
     She studied his face closely, tilting her head, looking at every detail, his dark curly hair, his ears, his hazel eyes, looking carefully at his chin. “My god,” her expression got so stern that Jeff pulled back, “you’re not him, are you?”
     “Who?” Jeff felt uneasy, she stared intently at him.
     “You’re not him.” She shook her head. “Jesus, you could be his goddam perfect twin brother, but you’re not him. What are you doing here?” Her expression darkened even more. “Who are you?”
     “Name’s Jeff, who are you?”
     “Why are you here?”
     “I don’t know. I just kind of followed this guy Pick over here from the Underground. I thought that Magic Town was, you know, where they pull rabbits out of hats.”
   She glowered at him, sat up with a piercing scowl. “You’re kidding right? I mean what kind of con-man black guy named Pick brings you to a rabbit hat place on the shitty side of Atlanta?” She looked at him with a disgusted glare, “What? Were you born yesterday?”
     “Look, I’m just a business man, a tourist that hooked up with this guy. He brought me here. You know, a mini-vacation. And I think I was having an okay time until you came out on that stage.” Jeff returned her intent look. “So what’s the deal with you? What kind of nice white chick ends up showing off her ass in a place like this?”
     Shonna turned away for a second, back again. “I shouldn’t even be talking to you.” She turned, looking at a big chip in the wall in front of her keenly for a few seconds, tilted her head slightly, shifting in the chair as though something occurred to her. She looked back at Jeff, the corners of her mouth curling into a half-smile as though she was working something over in her head. They sat there for what felt like ten minutes, total silence.
     Jeff looked at her face, it was perfectly shaped, a perfect compliment to her body which was on the thin side with just the right shapeliness. She had fine features, eyelids that hung nearly to the black circle of her retinas that were so focused on him at that moment. Bedroom eyes. He sighed, he was a total sucker for a woman with bedroom eyes.
     She had a strong chin though it didn’t protrude. Or maybe that was because of the expression she was giving him now. There was no question of her perfectly shaped face that so wonderfully matched her perfectly shaped body. He tried to look beyond her intent expression, he could see a really beautiful woman in front of him inspecting every detail of his face at that very moment.
     Her face suddenly softened, the corners of her mouth curled into a smile, “Look, I’m sorry, I didn’t really mean anything.” She half-reached out to him with her left hand but didn’t touch him, giving him a little more smile. “I’m a student. Studying business at Brown University. Everyone tells me that the girls can make a lot of money on the stage. Hell, I made nearly a hundred dollars in one dance!”
     “Yeah, but fifty probably came from me, maybe more.”
     “The guys have been trying to get me to do this for months. Okay, maybe I won’t get rich, but I’m warning you…you need to know…look, this can be a really dangerous place, these can be really dangerous people. Nice white guys shouldn’t be hanging out around here. You shouldn’t have come here.”
     “Well, I’m here.” Jeff glanced at his watch. “It’s nearly midnight and I probably won’t be able to get a train back to my hotel, so what do I do?”
     Shonna put her finger to her mouth thoughtfully. She sighed.
     “Your name’s Shonna?”
     “Yes, with an O and two N’s.”
     “Really, I’ve never heard it spelled like that.”
     Jeff suddenly noticed her eyes, at first he could not figure out what was so unusual. Her eyes were a bright gold, almost as though they had started out to become green but just somehow could not manage such an ordinary color. Tiny little flecks of black swam in the golden color of her eyes, sprinkled in surrounding the dark irises that were so intently focused on his eyes. He heard words coming from her but just could not discern those sounds emanating from under those fascinating eyes. The tone of her words kept wanting to express that he was in some kind of trouble, danger even, but those eyes called to him in another voice, telling him not to see but to gaze, not to hear but to sense. He felt numb looking into those eyes that spoke to him as plainly as any words he ever heard, in a language he could not understand. A language he so desperately wanted to understand at that moment.
     He slowly started to hear words again, her eyes finally let loose of their spell allowing sounds to find his ears again. Shonna gave another soft sigh. “I don’t know. I suppose you could hang out with us, but I’m warning you this is a really tough bunch. You’ve got Pick. Chances are he can protect you okay. And I suppose I have no choice.”
     Jeff cocked his head as words were finally being processed inside his head, he could now make sense of those words which suddenly frightened him. “Protect me? What are we talking about? I mean, how bad can it be?” He shrugged shaking his head trying to make sense of her words, “I mean these are just a bunch of guys having a good time, right?” Now the words of warning from the shuttle driver and his wife rang in his ears. He tried to think quickly how he had gone from a little evening out in the Underground to now sitting in this scary hallway with a man wearing a gun on one end, this golden-eyed Amazon in front of him, a room full of guys upstairs that would probably rob and kill him as soon as look at him.
     How the hell did this happen?
     He felt a quick rush of panic, deliberately making a voice occur in his head telling him to calm down.
     I’ve been in fixes before, right?
     Calm down. Stay calm. Look cool.
     He looked at her gown smiling to himself at the black pagoda figures set in the red with little yellow-faced characters with hands together bowing to each other.
     She smiled again speaking softly, “Look, you seem like a nice guy who just got to the wrong place. There’s no way you’re going to get a cab from here and there’s no way you can go walking out of the club alone. And I’m sure the trains are stopped anyway.”
     Jeff didn’t even bother to look at his watch, he knew she was right. He waited, watching her closely.
     “You’re stuck here. Well, at least you have me and Pick.” She looked at him again, slowly, back to examining every feature of his face. “Stand up.”
     Jeff raised his eyebrows standing up anyway, turning around as she signaled him with a swirling motion of her fingers.
     She put her finger to her right cheek, “Hmmmm, maybe just a little taller. What are you, about five-ten or so?” He nodded. “Me too,” she smiled, “it’s okay, that’s a good height.”
     “And what about you?” as he sat down, “I thought you were a new dancer here and that made me think nobody knows you.”
     “I told you that I’m a business student, right?” He nodded. “Seems I’ve got a knack with numbers.” She paused, thought for a second, “Look, you look like I can trust you. You don’t look like the kind of guys who’s going to conk me on the head.” She considered for a second, “I work part time keeping the books for this place. I spend all my time locked in that room over there,” pointing to the guarded door down the hall. “Tonight was just a way to get more people to know who I am. Kind of showing off. I spend all my time in that room down there or up in the office with the club owner. I wanted to get out, maybe have a little fun. It seemed kind of sexy to get up there to do what I did.”
     “Well, was it sexy? Was it what you thought?” he smiled wondering.
     She paused for a second with a half-smile. “Yeah, it was sexy. I mean, I’ve been to the nude beaches out south of Savannah so I know what it’s like to be naked in front of other people.”
     Jeff laughed, “Nude beaches in Georgia?”
     She gave an indignant smirk, “Hey, we’re not all prudes in Georgia. But yes it was sexy, and I have to tell you that having you in the audience really helped!” He tilted his head in question. “I don’t know, seeing you out there, I don’t know, like being one of my peeps as they say, one of my people gave me a little more courage.”
     “And I suppose the tens and twenties helped too,” he laughed.
     She gave a bashful smile. “No, I mean that you have a sense of dignity about you that none of those cats do. You made me feel like I was giving a show, not just stripping my clothes off.” She shrugged, “Does that make sense?”
     He smiled, “I don’t know how, but it does make sense. I suppose I should say that I enjoyed seeing you up there, and well, you know that I was obviously at a strip club and must have come to see naked women.” He grinned. “But I really did think Pick was bringing me to a rabbit hat place!” They both laughed, he could tell that she was finally feeling relaxed.
     She got a more serious expression, “Plus I wanted to find out about the money the girls get.”
     “So you’re an accountant for this place? Wouldn’t you know how much money they get?”
     “I’m not an accountant. I am the accountant for this place. And no, the girls just take their tips.”
     “But I don’t get it.” Jeff shook his head. “This place has to be rolling in dough, why wouldn’t they just hire some professional bookkeeper. There must be stacks of cash in that room.”
     “Stacks, yeah that’s sure a word for it.” She continued in an almost casual tone, “Let’s just say that a bookkeeper would ask too many questions––they would probably not like the answers.”
     “Criminal?”
     “That’s a harsh word. Sometimes it’s just not that black and white.” She paused. “So you’re obviously some kind of businessman, where are you from, what do you do. Family? Kids?”
     Jeff told her the statistics.
     She grew more concerned.
     “Well, tell you what. We can’t let anything happen to someone with so much responsibility! Jesus, though, I wish you weren’t here.” She paused looking at him with a curled lip smile, “You know…” her voice trailed off. She deliberated, she studied him more. Jeff could see an emerging look like something was occurring to her, that she was making up her mind about something. “Everything happens for a reason, I guess, and seeing as you are here,” she gave a wry smile that she tried not to show, “let’s see what we can do with this.”
     There was a long silence. There were too many words in the jumble that he was hearing, like a big ball of yarn of loose words, lots of loose ends made of nouns and verbs hanging out, almost too many for him to catalog in his brain at that moment. Loose strings. Jeff started to fidget.
     She gave a quick smile, “Look, I get off in twenty minutes, at twelve-thirty. I’ve got a car out back. You need to go back up to your friends, buy them another round. Watch for me at twelve-thirty at the curtain, make all your worst excuses and meet me at the front door.” They started to get up when she said sternly, “And don’t go outside!”
     Shonna disappeared through the door with the big gold star. Jeff guessed it was the dressing room as he tried to look around her as she stepped back through just in case he might see other dancers in there. No such luck.
     He went back up the stairs. When he got to the table it was the break again, there was only one other man sitting next to Pick. “Hey, my man! You owe the waitress for four more rounds,” he signaled to her, she turned toward them.
     “That’ll be thirty two dollars, sugar.”
     “Sugar?”
     She gave a big smile, “Hell yes sugar, you’re the best tipper in the room!”
     Jeff glanced down at Pick who gave a shamed shrug and small sideways smile. Jeff turned back to the waitress, “How many rounds? Never mind, here’s forty dollars and bring us three more here, that should cover it, right?”
     She quickly counted the money, leaned over to Jeff with a quick kiss on the cheek. The whole room roared up, “Woooooooo!” Jeff sat down crimson faced.
     Jeff happened to glance over at the chairs that Panama Man had pointed to at the back of the room earlier, there were three different men there now. All this watching and yelling made Jeff thirsty, he drank two bottles of Bud that were stacked on the table in front of him, drank them straight down as the waitress showed up with three more. He glanced at his watch, saw stroke of twelve-thirty, he leaned over to Pick, “Hey, man, gotta go. It’s late and I gotta get back to my hotel.”
     “How you gonna do that? No way a cab’s coming to this side of town this time of night.”
     “I got a ride.”
     Pick gave a big grin, “A ride, huh? Any chance a white woman is your chauffeur?”
     “Come on my man, a guy’s gotta be discrete, right?”
     “Yeah, whatever you say brothuh, but I’ll probably catch up to you later anyway.”
     Jeff wondered at Pick’s words as he stood up glancing toward the door seeing Shonna standing at the curtain. “Okay, man, gotta go, thanks for everything,” he waved around the room vaguely at the nods, smiles, hands raised in goodbye.
     The man sitting next to Pick looked over to him as Jeff started to walk away, “Hey, where’s he going?”
     Pick gave a big smile waving after Jeff.
    “The white woman, where else?”


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