Wednesday, May 30, 2012

Magic Town, Chapter 6

Jeff, finds himself in Atlanta wanting to get out of the hotel on a Friday night. In the Atlanta Underground he meets up with Pick, a sly con man who takes Jeff around the Underground ending up at the notorious Magic Town strip club. There’s only one problem: Jeff is the spitting image of a corrupt congressman! Nancy, the beautiful FBI agent with the golden eyes takes Jeff on the ride of his life. With three climax scenes, this story will make you want to get to the next page!


Chapter 6 of Magic Town ...

Saturday, 5:08 AM: Bernice and the Diner

Shonna takes Jeff to a shoddy little coffee shop where Jeff discovers the shocking truth about why he has been suddenly thrust into this middle of the biggest corruption scandal in Atlanta history!

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           Magic Town, Chapter 6

Saturday, 5:08 AM: Bernice and the Diner

     Soon the buildings started to get taller, occasionally Jeff could see the high-rises of downtown Atlanta still lit up, getting just a little closer. The car pulled to a curb in a seedy neighborhood with taller buildings. Jeff figured they were still south of downtown. Without a word, Shonna got out of her car, Jeff did the same. She pointed across the street to a tiny little coffee shop, the only lighted-up building along the darkened street.
     “Why here?” he asked peering around the dismal scene as they crossed the street.
     “It’s either here or a Waffle House. And there’s way too many eyes in those places.”
     Jeff shrugged following her across the street. They pushed through the door, straight back to the farthest corner booth away from windows. There was one man, looked homeless with his big stuffed plastic bag on the bench seat next to him, a half-empty coffee cup in front of him, his head back, snoring. The entire rest of the room was empty, no sign of anyone behind the counter.
     Shonna slid into the booth, Jeff slid into the opposite side along the pink plastic-covered bench seat trying to move over a big rip near the end, stuffing bulging out. Shonna took a napkin from the dispenser sweeping what looked like a dried spaghetti noodle onto the floor.
     Jeff looked up at the bright florescent lights, the translucent cover of one hanging down over the cash register so that bare blue-white light bathed the cash register like some kind of religious icon at the Vatican. A row of swivel chairs turned every which way in the same bright pink upholstery were lined up in front of the lunch counter. The walls were gray, tinted with old cigarette smoke, the floors of black linoleum tiles with wiggles of gray lines. The whole room had a dingy worn-out look.
     Depressing.
     “So, are you in the game?”
     Jeff did a double take, “What?” He leaned forward. “What game?”
     “Look, there’s no way I know you from Moses, but something tells me we can trust you, and nobody knows who you are.” She paused with a deep sigh. “Look, I can’t tell you everything, but we have a situation that needs your help.”
     “But why me?” She didn’t answer.
     Jeff looked around wishing he had a cup of coffee to hold, that soothing hot black liquid that helps the start of a day feel more cohesive. “Can we get some coffee?”
     Shonna cupped her hands around her mouth shouting to the kitchen window, “Bernice!” In a few seconds a rotund black woman in a white apron and hair net pushed through the aluminum swinging door from the kitchen waddling up to the table holding a coffee pot in one hand, two cups in the other. Jeff smiled at her movements which were actually quicker than he thought she could do given her girth.
     “Okay, okay, Shonna, coffee for you and the gennleman, ah sees ya.” She set two cups down with a bang, filling the cups with the pot never getting within two feet of the table, all without spilling a drop, turned without another word pushing back through into the kitchen, the dented silver-painted metal door swinging behind her.
     Jeff tried to sip the steaming black liquid, looked to Shonna. “Better.”
     “Okay, then?” she asked. Jeff nodded at her, sipping again. “It’s gonna be light here soon. We have to do a little stakeout, then we are going to find someone that we need to find, have a little talk with him, and you are going to have to be somebody you are not.” She could see the puzzled expression on Jeff’s face.
     He suddenly noticed that she had a kind of lisp when she spoke. Not really a lisp, just the slightest touch of her tongue to her teeth as she spoke. It was so light, barely audible, it gave her soft voice a certain character that he didn’t notice before. He had already thought that her voice had no distinct traits, certainly not a voice that you would pick out in a crowd. The lisp, or whatever it was suddenly caught his ear.
     “Look, it’s simple really.” She bent her neck to look up into his face to catch his eye. “Are you listening? Look, there is a certain, let’s call him a respectable citizen, who got himself into a certain situation, and now he can’t get back out. Without help. The problem is that if his situation got out to the wrong people a lot of other people would probably get hurt.” She looked at Jeff who she could see was trying to follow along. “And things could get nasty if it’s not done right.”
     “What kind of nasty?”
     “People could get hurt.” Her eyes darted sideways as if in very quick thought, back intently into Jeff’s eyes, “Killed.”
     “Now wait a minute, I’m not signing up to get killed!”
     “No, no, there’s no chance of that. There’s only one little thing you have to do, you will be totally covered the whole time.”
     “Covered? You’re not any little bookkeeper are you? Who the hell are you?
     “I can’t tell you that.” She paused looking intently into Jeff’s eyes. “Let’s just say that I’m one of the good guys. And this particular gentleman we are talking about is also a good guy, at least we think.” She paused. “But okay, maybe he made some bad mistakes. But we are surrounded by some really bad guys.”
     “Bad guys?”
     “Yes, I told you that already. Really, really, bad guys. But not the kind of bad guys that go around shooting people.”
     “If they don’t shoot, then what makes them so bad?”
     “They shoot alright, but the bullets they use are extortion and blackmail.” She leaned over the table looking into his eyes, “And those bullets can hurt worse than the other ones. Those bullets don’t take away lives, those bullets ruin lives.
     “Extortion. Blackmail.” Jeff said those words almost to himself in a low voice, he shook his head sleepily, looking back to her, “But why me?”
     “Because––” She turned looking around her, stood up to reach back for a newspaper laying on the table behind her. She straightened it out laying it in front of Jeff.
     “Look at this picture.” She pointed to the picture he had seen in the newspaper rack at the train station through the dingy plastic that he couldn’t see through. “This is why you!”
     Jeff stared at the picture in utter disbelief, “Wait, that’s me!”
     “No, it’s not you, but it could be your goddamned twin brother! Your hair’s a little shorter, curlier maybe, that’s all, but men don’t notice things like that. That would take a woman’s eye.” How true Jeff thought. How true. A woman’s eye. The eye for detail with the detailed memory that not a man on earth possesses. Not even really gay ones. He half-laughed at the thought of the thousands of times that he and his wife would be out and about when she would make some comment about someone they see when he realized that she must be wearing glasses of a different color or something because she could see details that were completely lost on him. Or when she would get her hair cut or colored, two days later she would have to say, “You didn’t say anything about my hair, you like it?” He would suddenly realize what a dope he is saying yeah that he had noticed, that he forgot to say anything knowing damn well that she knew he didn’t notice. Oh, yes, the eye for detail that men just don’t have a single chromosome for.
     Jeff suddenly snapped to, staring in amazement at the photo of himself, of the congressman on the front page of the paper, reading the caption below about the missing congressman. “So what––”
     “So we have this little situation and we haven’t been able to figure it out and along comes a guy who is a spitting image of the guy causing all these problems. Seemed too good to be true.” She gave Jeff her first genuinely big smile. “And a nice guy, too, who wants to help us.”
     He was lulled by her smile, he couldn’t help it, “Help, yeah...” He looked into those golden eyes with the little black flecks among the gold.
     He was lulled.
     He sat up snapping back to the moment again, “Wait, not so fast! First, who is us? And what is this help you need? You need to tell me what’s going on!”
     She held up her hands to quiet him down. “Look, not so loud. I can’t tell you everything. That’s best for you, really, the less you know…” her voice trailed off.
     “The less I know?” Jeff looked intently at Shonna, bending across the table trying to get eye contact. She looked up, “The less I know, yes?”
     Shonna sat intently, pondering the situation, mulling what to say next.
     “Okay, here’s the deal. You are a spitting image of this congressman, Frank Schedz, and he has a certain habit of wandering off for a few days, sometimes weeks, without anyone knowing where he is. People think it’s all harmless, that he has a mistress or something like that. But the fact is that he has gotten mixed up with some very bad people. All those days off from official business has been to get all mixed up in the local corruption here in Atlanta, with congressman trumps mayor and all that at play.”
     “Frank Schedz. He’s the grandson of the donut king, Earl Schedz, right?” She gave him a half-smile. “He probably has tons of money. What’s he doing with those very bad people?”
     “He’s trying to rip them off, and so far he is winning. But things are getting tight. He is about to get himself into a whole lot of serious trouble. Maybe even physical danger. And that’s weird because the guys he’s playing with don’t usually work like that, but he is really pushing the limits. There’s a lot of big names involved, mostly in local politics, but this city is known for that kind of stuff and so people don’t take it too seriously. But this Frank congressman is getting reckless and careless and other law enforcement is beginning to think that maybe this is bigger than just some of the usual Atlanta hanky panky. For sure it is big. It may be very big.”
     “So where do you fit in?”
     “Let’s just say that I carry a badge, but you don’t know what flavor.”
     Jeff stared intently into her eyes. “So you’ve been keeping the books in the middle of all this. You infiltrated their organization, right? How did you pull that off?”
     “It’s amazing what happens when you play the dumb blond,” she pulled a strand of her hair around with her fingers in front of he face to look at it, “or dishwater redhead. Those stupid idiots actually believe it!”
     Jeff sat back smiling, “So let me see…Magic Town…the guy in the white Panama…missing congressman…a table of guys there and suddenly not there, then more guys again…henchmen, waiting for orders to go set a fire to a liquor store that hasn’t paid up.”
     Jeff looked for confirmation from Shonna, she nodded. This made sense from what little he’d seen. He continued, “… and I’ll bet we can throw in a little mayor and sprinkle it with a few city councilmen? And maybe the police for grins?” Jeff sat back. “Graft!”
     “What, do you read detective novels?”
     Jeff smiled. “Big fan of Sherlock Holmes. Oh, and others, too. You know, Grisham and those guys.”
     “You may be pretty bright there, Jeffery my man, and you got some of the pieces, but graft is too a small word for this. We are talking corruption that will blow the lid off of the whole of northern Georgia.”
     “So you’ve been laying low, watching the books, and what, is Magic Town like in the middle of all this?”
     “Let’s just say that those stacks of money we talked about in that room don’t hardly all come from beer, tits and ass.”
     “Payoffs of some kind. All cash, right?” Jeff leaned back. “So I show up, looking like this guy so you guys start thinking that you can fix this all up somehow. With me?” Shonna nodded. “But where do I fit in?”
     “We haven’t exactly got it all figured out yet,” she stood up, “but let me see if I can find out what’s cookin’.” She walked to a pay phone hanging on the wall. Turning her back to Jeff she inserted a coin, pushing buttons on the phone. He heard her talking clearly, very quietly into the phone, barely able to pick up two words together. She hung up, made another call spending another ten minutes talking in the same quiet voice. That was followed by a third shorter call.
     Jeff sat looking through the grimy windows seeing it still dark outside feeling a drowsy wave wash over him. He glanced at his watch, almost six.
     Soon Shonna turned walking to the table, turned poking her head over the swinging door to the kitchen calling Bernice again, returning to the table sitting down. A moment later Bernice came out to fill up each of their cups with her skillful pour from so high over the table, without a word turning back into the kitchen.
     Shonna lifted her cup with a determined smile, “Well, I guess you need to take first shift, so time to drink up.”
     “First shift?”
     Shonna told him that they there were two possible places the congressman would be, that they were going to stake out the place that she liked best.
     “So he’s what, kidnapped?”
     She laughed, “I doubt it. More likely that he’s laying in some woman’s bed with a very bad hangover about now. That man really does love his drink. We’re going to go sit to watch a house where I believe he is. We’ve got to get hold of him before he leaves, then we’ll have the little talk I told you about.”
     “Get hold of him?”
     “Damn rights, we can’t have two of him walking around!”

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Tuesday, May 29, 2012

Magic Town, Chapter 7

Jeff, finds himself in Atlanta wanting to get out of the hotel on a Friday night. In the Atlanta Underground he meets up with Pick, a sly con man who takes Jeff around the Underground ending up at the notorious Magic Town strip club. There’s only one problem: Jeff is the spitting image of a corrupt congressman! Nancy, the beautiful FBI agent with the golden eyes takes Jeff on the ride of his life. With three climax scenes, this story will make you want to get to the next page!


Chapter 7 of Magic Town ...

Saturday, 6:12 AM: The Stakeout

Jeff has discovered that he is the absolute spitting image of the crooked Congressman, Frank Schedz, and Nancy has convinced him to play along. Now he follows her along to a stakeout at six in the morning looking for the Congressman so Jeff can deliver a message to him. He learns more about this beguiling woman as she sits with binoculars pressed to her eyes watching the house with two porch lights. Soon a parade of characters, the mayor, police chief, city council members and others come out of the house only to be followed by the signal that something has gone very wrong!

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           Magic Town, Chapter 7

Saturday, 6:12 AM: The Stakeout

   Shonna reached into her purse pulling out a five, tossing it onto the table. They walked through the door, crossing the dark street to the blue Mustang. Jeff walked around to the passenger door. Shonna opened the trunk pulling out a sport bag, walked to the driver’s door, climbed in. She opened the bag, pulled out a pair of very long binoculars and a Nikon camera with the longest lens Jeff had ever seen.
     “Tools of the trade,” she said, turning to lay them on the back seat. Putting the key in the ignition, they pulled away from the curb.
     In only a few minutes the car was pulled over in a neighborhood a lot like the other they had been in earlier, filled with cars all parked helter-skelter, now with a few lights on in the house windows.
     “See that yellow house with the two lights on the porch way up there?” Jeff craned his neck forward trying to see which house she was talking about, nodding that he thought he knew the one. “Well here’s the deal, you got a few Z’s last night, so I need an hour or so. I doubt there will be any traffic yet, but here,” she reached back, grabbed the binoculars handing them to Jeff, “keep an eye on that house, if anyone comes in or out, wake me. Wake me in an hour no matter what.”
     Jeff took the binoculars, inspecting them. He had never seen such a nice pair before, focus, zoom, very nice. He looked through them, that door with two lights over it looked like he could reach out and touch the doorknob. He instantly heard Shonna’s even breathing, very impressed that she had managed to go to sleep so fast. He also knew she had been up all night.
     He watched that door intently for an hour. Nothing happened.
     He leaned forward looking up through the windshield watching great gray hands in the heavens slowly pulling the crescent moon back up into the darkened sky, daylight timidly touching the horizon with the slightest golden rim.
   Finally, he jostled Shonna who woke so fast it startled Jeff, “What, anything?”
   He replied that nobody came or went. She turned the key to look at the car’s clock, seven twenty.
     She took the binoculars from him, peering through them suddenly sitting up straight muttering to herself, “Good job, Nancy!”
     Nancy?”
     “It’s Shonna to you!” she gave a sly sideways smile. “Okay, Nancy, but it’s Shonna and please don’t blow it. If these guys think they’ve been infiltrated there’ll be hell.” He looked back at her with a wry grin. “I mean it! It’s Shonna. I told you these guys can get dangerous. When you meet my team they will all be calling me Shonna. It’s too damned easy to make the slip and it’s too dangerous to let it happen.”
     Nancy. Nice. It suits you.” She gave him a glancing smile peering through her binoculars again.
     “So what did you just see?”
     “Mayor’s chief aid just drove up. Yep, congressman’s there. Got to be.”
     “Why don’t you just go in and get him.”
     She grunted, “No thanks, nice way to get shot for sure. Any idea how many guns are in there?” She watched intently, silent.
     He watched her, turned his head toward the house, could see nothing.
     “So how involved are you in this case?”
     “This case? It’s my case.”
     “Your case?”
     “Accidental, really,” she glanced at him sitting in the passenger seat next to her.
     “How is it your case accidentally?”
     “I’m the one who found the first loose thread and just started following it.” He listened, leaning toward her.
     “I lived in Georgetown while I was in grad school.”
     “I thought you went to Brown.”
     “I did for my undergrad, did my masters at George Washington in DC. Lived in Georgetown, bit of a hustle to the university but what a great neighborhood.”
     Georgetown? Isn’t that a little pricey for a student?”
     She smiled, “Yeah, funny how things work out. I took a room. An old woman, you wouldn’t believe her name.”
     Jeff thought, smiling, “No, don’t tell me!”
     She laughed softly, “Yep, with an O and two N’s.” Jeff laughed thinking that spelling had to come from somewhere. “It’s the Irish spelling of the name. Anyway, I lived there for two years. We became good friends. She was in her eighties, was declining pretty fast toward the end, couldn’t leave the house. So I started doing little errands, pretty soon was doing all the errands, grocery shopping, that sort of thing. She had a part-time housekeeper who would come in and cook and do laundry, but I did the rest of the housekeeping, taking care of her.” She reflected. “It wasn’t bad, really. It was good, it fit perfect with my school schedule. She was really nice to me, always interested in my studies.”
     She adjusted the binoculars keeping them pressed to her eyes. “Anyway, she died. It turns out she had no family, at least that she knew of. I never knew what that really meant, whether they didn’t speak to each other or what, but nobody except a couple of old people who lived in the neighborhood ever came to visit. No Christmas cards or anything. Turns out she left me the house in her will.”

     “Wow, that doesn’t happen every day. That was pretty lucky.”
     “Yeah lucky, a poor little grad student with a big house right in the middle of Georgetown. And a nice bit of money, too. Got to pay off my student loans with money left over. But it wasn’t all a completely clean deal.”
     “Why, what happened?”
     “About six months after everything was settled I get a call from a guy saying that he was her grandson who started asking all sort of questions. Next thing I know I’m getting a letter from some attorney saying he was contesting the will.”
     “I guess you would have to expect something like that, right?”
     “Yeah. At first I wasn’t sure and started thinking that maybe he was right, that he should have something from his grandmother. Then the next phone call he started getting really jerky. Really hostile. So I got to thinking where was he on the holidays, where was this guy when I was emptying her bedpans and wiping her butt? The more I thought about it the madder I got. I mean you don’t know me very well, but when I think something is mine I go after it and I won’t let anyone take anything from me! Nobody!”
     “So what did you do?”
     “I asked around the agency and everyone said that there is one rule in lawsuits: always make sure your attorney is better than theirs. So I got the name of one of those, you know, really high-powered attorneys you read about in the newspapers who was recommended by my boss’s boss who told me to call this guy and mention his name. I just kind of held my breath because there was no way I could pay for a three-hundred-dollar an hour guy. So I told him about the situation, next thing I know I am getting copies of letters sent back and forth between him and the grandson’s attorney, then nothing.” Jeff watched her in anticipation. “Finally I got my nerve up to call this attorney, ask him what happened, how much I owe him. He came on the line, said the other guy lost his nerve and didn’t I read his letters? I said no, not really, so he told me to go look at the letters and I would see that we threatened to counter sue them. They went away. Well, I was really happy and all, but when I asked him how much I owe him he kind of laughed, said not to worry that it wasn’t that much work, that he did it as a favor for my boss’s boss. Seems his firm gets a lot of business from the agency.”
     They both laughed together, Jeff grinned, “Boy, so you were one really well-connected student and didn’t even know it, huh? Did you ever go back to read the letters?”
     She glanced at him, “Yeah, and what made them go away was my attorney’s threat to counter sue and to have the grandson charged with elder neglect! I mean how could this guy pop out of the middle of nowhere trying to get his hands on the estate when he never even bothered to send a Christmas card!”
     “So that’s what they meant when they said to get a better attorney!”
     “I guess so, but it sure was good advice, huh?”
     “How is it that someone your age was in graduate school? Isn’t that the thing people do in their twenties?” She gave him a sideways glance, “Not that you’re not in your twenties!” They both laughed together as she squeezed the binoculars back to her face.
     “Oh, I don’t know, I just kept going in and out of school, each time not finding anything that really got my attention until I happened to take a criminal law class and, well, it just lit me up.”
     She glanced at him, “Isn’t that what you did?” He frowned that she somehow knew this little factoid about him.
     “So how does this all fit into this case?”
     “Well, it seems the congressman happened to have a house in Georgetown. It was on my walk to the university. A couple times I saw him as I was walking by. No big deal, you saw all sorts of government people on that side of town.”
     She pulled the binoculars down rubbing her eyes, held them back up. “Anyway, I started to notice more and more, how would I say it,” she paused in quick thought, “let’s say non-Georgetown types more and more going in and out of his house. A few times I kept seeing the same black man, a big guy who seemed to go through cycles of hanging out at this congressman’s house, so I got curious. I took the license plate of the car he was in one time, contacted the limo company, found out he was the mayor of Atlanta.”
     Jeff nodded, listening intently as she continued, “I was doing my internship at Department of Justice which gave me access to just about any kind of data that could help me figure out if anything was going on.” She glanced at him, “I don’t know, there was just some kind of gut feel that something wasn’t right. So I started doing all the usual checks, you know, income, tax returns, bank accounts, property records, things like that, all the stuff I could get really easy.” She shook her head slowly, “It didn’t add up.” Jeff cocked his head listening. “I mean, how does a guy who makes eighty four thousand a year as mayor live in a three million dollar house, drive three Mercedes, and have a country club membership? This guy was rolling in dough.”
     “Well, I suppose…” Jeff pondered, though he really had no clue.
     “And none of it come through his bank accounts?” She shook her head just slightly, not to lose her gaze on the house.
     “Anyway, I was just finishing school, took a position with the FBI, got too busy to do anything about it at first, I just kind of forgot about it for a year as I was getting my feet wet at the agency. So one day I happened to walk by his house and there’s the mayor coming out of the congressman’s house again. So I went to my chief, told him about it and what I had discovered before. I was expecting him to say thanks to watch him hand it to another agent, but instead he appointed me as a co-lead agent and hooked me up with an older colleague who decided this was going to be my case, used it more like a way to mentor me.” She turned to him with a satisfied smile going back to her binoculars, “Soon my mentor just kind of backed out of the case and there I was, lead agent by default!”
     “Wow, that’s quite a story. So this is your case.”
     She glanced at him with a nod. “That was two years ago. I’ve been on this case since. I figured the congressman has been involved for four years, a year before I discovered it, the year while I let it be, and two years since.”
     Jeff watched this woman sitting next to him. He couldn’t see her captivating eyes looking at him as he suddenly felt a wave of deeper understanding of this woman, a warm flow over his body trickling over his head, through is hair like a warm shower onto his shoulders, washing down around his back as he felt a warm flush across his chest, feeling his face turning flush. He was glad she was looking into her binoculars and not at him that moment.
     “So you said I am going to be doing some kind of talking sense into somebody.”
     She glanced sideways to him quickly, back to the binoculars. “Yes, I believe he’s in that house, but we need to make sure he’s alone. This is going to be a very serious talk.”
     “What am I supposed to be saying to this person?”
     “Well, you’re not exactly going to be doing the talking, more like delivering a message.”
     “What kind of message?”
     “That it’s time to straighten up and fly right. Look, don’t worry about that right now, I’ll fill you in when the time comes.”
     They sat in quiet, Jeff squinting in the morning light to see the house. “Oh, good,” she said softly, “sweet.”
     “Update?”
     “No, false alarm, that’s not who I thought.” She kept the binoculars clutched to her face. “So did Pick get you at the ATM next to Ricky Rocket’s?”
     “Why?”
     “Good. He just walked back out of the house.”
     “Yeah, Rickey Rocket’s. How did you know?”
     “I swear every lonely white business guy must go to that ATM at least once in his life. You wouldn’t believe the people he hauls to Magic Town.”
     She adjusted the binoculars, “But I wonder what he’s doing there?”
     Jeff got a hurt expression, “People, as in other guys? As in lots of them all meeting up with Pick at that ATM?”
     “Yep.”
     “That’s his routine?”
     “Yep. Always the same. Let me guess, you bought him drinks and dinner, then followed him over to Magic Town and you spent how much there? I saw you spreading a lot of money around. He’s the best pick pocket in Atlanta. How much money did he get from you?”
     Jeff reached into his pocket pulling out twenty-two dollars doing a little arithmetic in his head, “Two hundred and something, maybe two hundred ten dollars.”
     She adjusted the binoculars again, “Who’s that with him? Hmmmm. All that cash plus your credit card, drinks and dinner, tips of course, always really big tips, right?”
     Jeff stared at the money in his hand, “God, maybe three hundred dollars! He did it all with a smile! And I smiled the whole time too!” He chuckled to himself. “Well, I’ll be damned, I’m the best Mark in town, huh?”
     “Yep. He’s the best pick pocket in Atlanta. Not a police report in sight.”
     “Well, I’ll be god damned. Three hundred dollars.” He looked up at the car ceiling laughing out loud, “Pick!”
     She laughed with the binoculars to her eyes. “Your common street mugger may get what, fifty bucks? A hundred? And a night in jail for all his trouble! Yep, Pick’s definitely a star when it comes to his style of pick pocketing white guys standing at that ATM.” She frowned with an intent voice, “Well there they go, but who was that other guy?”
     Jeff laughed again, “Does he work for your agency?”
     “Nope, he’s a free agent.”
     “But you pay him?”
     “A few thousand. He is an extra set of ears and eyes for us, nothing strategic. But I trust him and he has given us some really good inside information. Plus,” she glanced away from her binoculars, “he keeps dragging all you businessmen to Magic Town and we end up with people like you!” They both laughed, Jeff suddenly realizing why him being the only white guy in the club didn’t create any stir last night. Evidently it meant that Pick had just found another Mark. He smiled at this explanation for why all the chairs at his table at front of the runway filled so quickly!
     She shushed him adjusting the zoom on the binoculars. “What the hell are these guys all doing up so early? On a Saturday? There’s something really big going on here.” She put down the binoculars, rubbed her eyes picking them up again, looking up and down the street. “Oh, Christ, please no.”
     “What,” Jeff strained to look down the street, “what?”
     “There’s an unmarked up the block watching.” She sighed. “Protection.”
     “Protecting what?”
     “The mayor’s assistant left. That must mean the mayor is in there, no other reason to have a watch. Don’t worry,” smiled Shonna, “they are about to leave.”
     “Leave?”
     “Yep, his honor is just coming out. Oh, god, the chief, too. Hand me the camera.” Jeff reached back handing it to Shonna, she set the binoculars in her lap. In less than a second the camera started clicking and whirring with the auto-winder. Silence. More clicking, whirring. “Jesus, what are all those guys doing there? What the hell is going on? What are they all doing here?”
     “Who all?”
     “The mayor, vice mayor, two, no, three council members, the police chief, two others, look like captains. God almighty, in uniforms even, arrogant pricks, what’s wrong with these guys? Is there a party going on in there? Why are they standing at the curb like that? What are they waiting for?”
     She watched intently. “Who they hell are they?
     “Who?”
     Jeff pulled the binoculars from Shonna’s lap holding them up to see two really big black men just coming out of the house, signaling to the mayor. “Smile boys,” Shonna smirked as the camera clicked and whirred a few times.
     “Wait, that tattoo!” Jeff adjusted the binoculars, “I saw him last night at the club!” He heard three clicks and whirs.
     “The mayor’s turning to get into his car,” she said quietly.
     She paused, “Finally Perkins! Damn I thought he abandoned us! Here he comes driving up. Where you been big guy? Out of the car.” Long pause. “Good boy, Perk, wave to the nice mayor, grin, let them know you are there and you’ll play babysitter. Good boy.” Pause. “Waiting till they leave.” Pause. “Good. Now go into the house, signal us what’s going on, then come back out with your hands on your hips and we’ll come have our little chat with the congressman.”
     “Who is Perkins?” Jeff glanced at his watch noting the time.
     “The bouncer.”
     “The big guy from Magic Town? That guy?”
     Still peering through the camera she smiled, “You bet, he’s our eyes and ears there. Doesn’t miss a trick, has this like photographic memory for faces. He thought you were the congressman so that’s why he put you up front.”
     “I thought I got up there because of my tip.”
     “Oh, I’m sure he was glad to keep your money, but no.” Jeff remembered some of the things Perkins said to him, asking about his driver, remembering when he first came in and him saying even for you, sir.
     “So this Perkins, is he a cop, too?”
     “No, he works for the club. We manage to pay him more on the side but he doesn’t know anything about me, about Nancy, he thinks I’m just the stupid blonde bean counter, even though I not even blond. I am sure he wants to get into my pants.” She laughed, “Especially after last night!”
     Jeff gave her a sideways glance that she could sense even with the camera to her eye. Yeah, he thought to himself watching her sitting next to him, I’d like to get into your pants, too! He leaned back just a bit as he could picture her trim body that he’d seen last night at Magic Town, picture that beautiful body laying on some bed. He put that image on his hotel bed, her coaxing him with curling fingers. Him standing there admiring her, undressing with her saying things like what a manly man he was, giving a little shriek seeing him naked, Jeff approaching the bed…
     “Yeah, Perkins.” Jeff snapped out of his daydream turning to her. “He’s a good guy and he’s so big people are afraid to screw with him. That helps everyone in the club, especially me. Really keeps a lid on things. I really go out of my way to help him out when he needs. Got him out of a couple messes.”
     Jeff could hear Shonna breathing heavily as she watched through the camera so intently. She was waiting for something to happen. She motioned to him with her right hand, “Open the glove compartment.” In the glove compartment there was a police radio with a little red light zooming back and forth across the face.
     “Why don’t you guys use cellular phones?” He prided his Motorola clam phone the little four-inch square wonder that he carried. It was back in his suitcase because his company was getting all upset that his bill was running over nine hundred dollars a month. They were wanting him to refund his personal calls. The roaming charges were running up to two dollars a minute so he just figured out that pays for a lot of calling-card calls for a tenth of that.
     She nodded, “Cell phones are too unreliable. Can’t take chances. Maybe when they get the network built out, but we can’t take chances of no communication.” He nodded, she was right. He recalled a long phone conversation he had once while driving around Los Angeles that was done in seven segments as he drove, the line kept cutting out. That one call cost twenty eight dollars.
     “Hand me the microphone,” she motioned holding out her right hand, taking it holding it to her mouth. Still looking into the camera she clicked the side of the microphone, “Tom, you there?” There was an unintelligible crackling with a voice in there somewhere. Jeff couldn’t make out a word. “Good, yeah, Perkins will give the signal in a second. Then we can go in to have that talk with our little man, assuming he’s not passed out as usual.”
     Jeff assumed she was talking about the congressman, wasn’t sure as he glanced at his watch again, nearly two minutes had passed since Perkins went in.
     “She leaned forward, pressing the camera to her eye, “What’s taking him so long?” Another full minute passed, her breathing quickening. “Where is he? Where is he? What’s taking so long?”
     She gave a small sigh of relief, “Good, there he is.”
     Jeff glanced at the time again, four minutes had passed since he went in.
     “What’s he doing? He’s looking back into the door. He went back in again!”
     She threw the camera onto the back seat pulling the binoculars away from Jeff’s face while still holding the radio microphone. “Tom, here he comes out again, he’s just coming out! But what’s he doing, where’s the signal?”
     “He crossed his arms!” Clicking the mic she screamed, “OH, GOD, CROSSED ARMS! CROSSED ARMS! WE GOT TROUBLE! TOM! WE GOT TROUBLE! I’M GOING IN NOW! WAIT FOR MY SIGNAL!”
    “I’M GOING IN NOW!”

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Monday, May 28, 2012

Magic Town, Chapter 5

Jeff, finds himself in Atlanta wanting to get out of the hotel on a Friday night. In the Atlanta Underground he meets up with Pick, a sly con man who takes Jeff around the Underground ending up at the notorious Magic Town strip club. There’s only one problem: Jeff is the spitting image of a corrupt congressman! Nancy, the beautiful FBI agent with the golden eyes takes Jeff on the ride of his life. With three climax scenes, this story will make you want to get to the next page!




Chapter 5 of Magic Town …

Saturday, 12:48 AM: The House

Shonna takes Jeff along for a little ride to a seedy neighborhood somewhere in south Atlanta where he spends the next few hours sleeping on a dusty couch while others gathered at a small table keep looking back at him in disbelief, and where he
meets up with Pick again!


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           Magic Town, Chapter 5





Saturday, 12:48 AM: The House

     Jeff pushed his way around tables to the curtained door. He started to push through the curtain, the bouncer stepped in front of him, “Where you goin’? You caint go out there. Yo driver out there?”
     Jeff looked up at the black face towering over him, “Out. Back home. I don’t have a driver.”
     “What, did he leave? Dey’s no cabs out there, white boy could get himself hurt out there,” he scowled, “even you!”
     “Wait, yes, I do have a driver!” He looked up at the face towering over him, “I do have a ride!”
     The bouncer pulled back the curtain a bit, glanced through, got a signal Jeff couldn’t see, shrugged stepping aside, pulling the curtain back so Jeff could walk through with a thanks as he went.
     The curtain fell back. Jeff stood in the darkness, the music came up again THUMP THUMP THUMP THUMP, the chorus of men’s shouts rising, definitely fewer voices than before. Jeff stood in the dark of the short hall between the front door and black curtain with just the outline of swirling lights around the black curtain behind him, almost total darkness down the other direction of the short hall toward the front door with the side door to the right that went downstairs. He remembered Shonna’s words not to go outside so he guessed that he could feel trapped if he cared to. Somehow he didn’t feel trapped. Just kind of numb. Waiting.
     He was surprised at how sober he felt given how much he’d drank tonight. Shonna’s words shouted down from the runway came back to him, something about not screwing this up, how she wished he wasn’t here. Wonder what that all means? And who do people keep thinking I am? He shrugged it off as just something that came out of all the craziness in that god awful loud room with all those drunken men shouting, banging on tables, the alcohol-sloshed high spirits. Jeff smiled, nothing like beer and naked women to get a rise out of a room full of men!
     Suddenly two men burst through the front door, Jeff felt a rush of cool outside air gushing into the stuffy short corridor. The door closed behind them, they wordlessly pushed past Jeff to the curtain that was pulled back, twirling lights flooding into the small corridor. Even though they were both black, Jeff noticed a tattoo, a kind of twisted up snake on a right arm reflecting the light coming from the bar, gone as the curtain fell.
     Jeff heard a voice. He was trying to figure out where it was coming from when he saw light from a side door on the left side of the front entrance that he didn’t notice before, across from the door on the right he went through before. There was a woman’s silhouette in the doorway signaling to Jeff, he stepped to the door into a dimly lit hallway seeing Shonna walking, turning signaling him to follow her. They walked about thirty steps, turning left facing a long, dim hallway. They passed a closed door on the left with light around the edges, Jeff could hear faint laughing through the door, thumping music could still be heard ever so faintly, so much much quieter. Continuing for what seemed like another fifty steps they turned left again, went another thirty steps, on the right he saw Shonna open a door. Jeff felt the night’s coolness rushing into the stifling corridor.
     He stepped through the door emerging into the darkness, the night air feeling so good on his face coming out of the airless smoke-filled building, some kind of back parking lot, a couple flood lights on the building shining down. Jeff looked up, could see a few stars in the sky barely poking through the city lights. There was a group of men on the far side huddled together in the darkness, one glanced over, turned back to the group. Jeff followed Shonna winding through the cars until she went around the side of what looked like a Mustang, waving him to the passenger side. He sidled around the dark blue car opening the door.
     Settling into the seat, Jeff automatically reached for the seatbelt, latched it; Shonna laughed quietly at this fastidious man, she didn’t say anything, starting the car. Without a word, she pulled out of the parking lot, took a left heading through isles of tall dark warehouses. Soon they were driving through low houses with cars parked everywhere, everything crowded together. Even at this late hour there were people walking around or sitting on front porches or standing huddled in groups in the darkness occasionally turning to look as they passed.
     “Did you tell anyone where you’re staying?”
     Jeff was startled by her voice. He thought, saying no he was sure he hadn’t.
     “Good, they won’t know how to find you.”
     “Find me?”
     Shonna didn’t answer, soon the car slowed, she turned into a driveway that was blocked with cars. She slowly navigated around a car in the driveway steering up onto the lawn. Jeff looked out seeing there was no lawn, just a dirt patch in front of the house. He looked at the house, a tiny white building, light coming around drawn curtains.
     He saw her look at the light in the window frowning, shaking her head.
     “You live here?”
     Shonna laughed, “Yeah, if you can call this living. Pretty small, huh?” Jeff nodded with a frown. “You probably live in some big house with lots of sunshine and picket fences. I tell people my house is so small you can see all four sides at once.”
     Jeff laughed, “That’s funny!”
     “Yeah, well you gotta have a sense of humor when you live someplace like this. Best part is there is me and two whole families living here. I’m the only one with a room to myself.”
     “Really? Whole families live in one bedroom?”
     “Yeah, our little three-bedroom one-bath paradise. Eleven people.” Jeff didn’t answer looking around him, for the first time seriously starting to regret how the evening had progressed.
     The car engine stopped. Shonna stepped out. “Okay, we’re going in, but don’t say a word unless I tell you.” Jeff nodded, his attention fixed on the house. “Hope you like the couch, but don’t get used to it, you’ll be up in a few hours.”
     Jeff got out of the car following Shonna to the front door, looking down at the old rain-stained couch and ripped stuffed chair to the right of the door facing the street. She opened the front door to the sound of voices. There was a small chorus of greetings, she signaled Jeff to follow. When he walked into the room there was sudden silence, all eyes on him as he stepped uncomfortably into the room dimly lit with a single shaded lamp sitting on an end table with a broken leg, propped against the faded red couch for support, a second lamp hanging above a small table with four people sitting around it, all staring at him.
     Shonna shook her head at them, “I know what you’re thinking, but it’s not him.” She pulled up another mismatched chair, the others opening their circle as Shonna stepped over to sit down, pointing Jeff to the couch which he stepped over to, flopping down. He patted the couch on each side, small clouds of dust puffed up tickling Jeff’s nose.
     All faces were still turned toward him as Shonna smiled, “Something, huh? Whoda thought. Fell right into our laps.”
     Soon the faces were turned across the table, a quiet discussion ensued.
     The tiny room could have only be five paces across each way, a filthy stove covered with dirty pots and pans, a small refrigerator covered with children’s drawings, school photographs of small faces peering into the dim room. There was a small hallway at the back of the room on Jeff’s right with four doors, three closed, an open bathroom door.
     With voices so low Jeff couldn’t hear a word, the group huddled talking softly. Every so often one would glance over at Jeff as though he was somehow part of their conversation. He continued feeling uneasy. He sat listening intently, he couldn’t hear a word sitting there, suddenly feeling a wave of tired wash over him, he started to close his eyes, got up going into the bathroom to pee, too many beers. The bathroom was disgusting with rust stains in the sink, towels piled on the floor, a toilet that looked like it hadn’t been cleaned in a hundred years. He felt uneasy even about peeing into it fearing that something might climb up the stream to infect him with god knows what. At least it flushed.
     He stepped back out into the living room, sat back down on the couch leaning his head back. He was out like a light. 

     A loud laugh made Jeff jerk up his head. He looked around for a second trying to remember where he was. Pick’s face was hovering in front of his eyes, Jeff pulled back, “Pick!” The whole room burst into laughter, Jeff’s startled expression made them laugh another round again. “Wow, Pick! What are you doing here?”
     “I told you I’d catch up with you later!” Jeff shook his head trying to wake up, looked at his watch, glinting in the darkness to see a few minutes after three thinking to himself, “A couple hours sleep.”
     “Man, Pick. What are you doing here?”
     Pick laughed, “The question is, what are you doing here?”
     “I followed Shonna, or rather…Shonna drove me here.”
     Pick signaled Jeff to move over, flopping down on the low couch next to Jeff in a puff of dust, Jeff sneezed. “Bless you, brothah.” He waited for Jeff to stop sniffling. “Well, remember I promised you an interesting evening.” The words rung in Jeff’s ears; it seems that lots of people promised him an interesting evening. “Why didn’t you leave like a nice white boy and go back to your hotel?”
     Jeff paused, reaching for a reason. Any reason. There was no reason. “Well, I was having fun and just kind of missed the chance to leave, and then Shonna drove me here.” He rubbed his eyes smacking his lips trying to get the taste of stale beer out of his mouth. “Then I just kind of ended up here.”
     Pick chuckled smiling, turning to see waving coming from the table. He stood up to go over to the group at the table, Jeff flopped back against the couch. He could recall hearing the word “tomorrow” as he drifted off again. 

     “Hey, wake up!” Jeff startled again, looking up at Shonna, the room quiet, empty behind her. He glanced at his watch, after four-thirty.
     “What’s going on?”
     “We need to go pay someone a visit, we’ve got to go now.” Shonna reached down pulling on Jeff’s left arm, “Come on, sleepy man, time to wake up, we gotta go now.”
     Jeff stood up, stretched, yawning he followed Shonna out the door. In another minute he was in the blue Mustang again driving through streets crowded with cars, deserted of people, all the houses now dark. Not a soul to be seen.
     “Where are we going?”
     “To talk a little sense into someone, but first to get some coffee.”
     Jeff frowned. “What’s going on here, why are you taking me along with you? I mean, in a couple hours I could probably find a cab back to my hotel.”
     Shonna glanced at Jeff as she drove silently, Jeff could see she was choosing her words carefully. “Look, your coming along like you did…we didn’t plan it like this, but you came along…” She paused, paying attention to turning left with only one car on the street passing as she turned. “Let me ask you a question.”
     Jeff sat silent.
     “Have you ever been in trouble, like you got yourself in over your head and you’re not sure what to do?”
     “I’m kind of there now.”
     Shonna chuckled, “Okay, fair enough, but you can make it back to your hotel and fly back to wherever and it be all done, right? But let’s say you were somebody else and you got really involved in something that was really over your head and you felt like you were stuck.”
     He looked toward her as she drove, “You mean hypothetically.”
     “Yes, hypothetically.”
     “Is this something I did or something that happened to me?”
     “Let’s say it was something you did to start, but then things happened that made it really complicated and started getting all sorts of people involved and some of those people are not very nice.” She glanced at him. “Anything like that?”
     Jeff looked off to the high rises of downtown Atlanta in the distance still lit up, trying to think what she was saying. “No, my life’s not really that complicated.”
     “Well, sometimes people do get themselves into complicated things. When that happens, sometimes they just need someone to talk a little sense into them.”
     Jeff puckered his brow in the dark. “Sense?” He looked around trying to figure out where they were. “Okay, so someone needs to have some sense talked into them. But why do I have to come along?”
     “Because you’re the one who is going to be doing the talking.”
   

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